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Heart Crafted Poems - 2023

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Musing of an old man

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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I love it. A great picture and amusing words to describe the many faces we wear in a day. But I like the way you ended it:
"Always smile, it takes less muscle
knowing life is just one big hustle."

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
    Anne, we have to, laugh at ourselves, that is for certain!
reply by Anne Johnston on 16-Mar-2023
    You are so right.