A Cost
If we don't use it, will we lose it?27 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great! And these two lines even rhymed! An excellent rendition of the contest theme, very deep and original. Loved your creative imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the booths, it should do very well.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Great! And these two lines even rhymed! An excellent rendition of the contest theme, very deep and original. Loved your creative imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the booths, it should do very well.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you! I truly appreciate your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-You have used effective imagery,
internal rhyme and end rhyme.
-You establish the premise well in the first line.
-I like the two parts of the concluding line
showing what is happening, and the impact that will have.
-You put a lot of thought into this.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-You have used effective imagery,
internal rhyme and end rhyme.
-You establish the premise well in the first line.
-I like the two parts of the concluding line
showing what is happening, and the impact that will have.
-You put a lot of thought into this.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Pam!:)
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You are welcome.
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You are very welcome😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you make a good point here and the use of phones and social media may kill our empathy as we live in a virtual world where nothing seems to be real, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I think you make a good point here and the use of phones and social media may kill our empathy as we live in a virtual world where nothing seems to be real, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Dolly!
Comment from Wendy G
An astute and timely observation. I would put a dash between "humankind" and "all" to clarify the meaning and smooth the flow, but otherwise, I really enjoyed this one because it is both thoughtful and meaningful as well as timely and relevant. Well done and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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An astute and timely observation. I would put a dash between "humankind" and "all" to clarify the meaning and smooth the flow, but otherwise, I really enjoyed this one because it is both thoughtful and meaningful as well as timely and relevant. Well done and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy. Excellent suggestion, I made that edit. I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from kahpot
A wonderful message here, as your words enhance this combined with the chosen artwork, we must look to help future generations, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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A wonderful message here, as your words enhance this combined with the chosen artwork, we must look to help future generations, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! I agree, it's a bit troubling.
Comment from royowen
There's a lot of anomalies in evolution that can't be answered, for instance evolution should go from Chaos to order, and the evidence is it's going the other way, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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There's a lot of anomalies in evolution that can't be answered, for instance evolution should go from Chaos to order, and the evidence is it's going the other way, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy! Appreciate your feedback, as always. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from JT traveller
This poem, albeit short, resonates with me. There is very little human interaction these days. It is almost as if people are afraid or have lost the art of communication and verbal conversation. Most prefer to tap away on their phones. Your poem is a sad but true reflection on the state of the world today.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This poem, albeit short, resonates with me. There is very little human interaction these days. It is almost as if people are afraid or have lost the art of communication and verbal conversation. Most prefer to tap away on their phones. Your poem is a sad but true reflection on the state of the world today.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Yes! It?s a troubling truth. Thanks so much for your feedback:)
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My pleasure 😊
