The Divine Nonsense of Jim Wile
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "My Earlobes"A collection of 13 humorous poems
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice phone humorous in your poor ears get stung like that. Oh man I bet the sun burns them too eh? Yes I understand the funny games of getting old however my ears are a little bit closer to my head l o l.
Your poem is very clever rhymes well and close well subject matter is really cute appreciated.
I find no issue with your spelling or Is sentence structure or punctuation. All looks good to me. I find this to be a sweet and interesting and very real poem. Thank you so much I look forward to your next submission!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Very nice phone humorous in your poor ears get stung like that. Oh man I bet the sun burns them too eh? Yes I understand the funny games of getting old however my ears are a little bit closer to my head l o l.
Your poem is very clever rhymes well and close well subject matter is really cute appreciated.
I find no issue with your spelling or Is sentence structure or punctuation. All looks good to me. I find this to be a sweet and interesting and very real poem. Thank you so much I look forward to your next submission!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Lea. It's funny how much your ears begin to grow as you get older. That isn't me in the picture, but I'm definitely headed that way!
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Great picture that fits the poem thx!
Yes noses have a way of doing that too l o l
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The chorus works very well here and certainly adds to the overall comic effect! I like the irony too! When older people say they're not complaining- they usually go on to list their ailments in detail!
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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The chorus works very well here and certainly adds to the overall comic effect! I like the irony too! When older people say they're not complaining- they usually go on to list their ailments in detail!
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Sarah.
My wife and I often kid about this. When I ask her how she's feeling today, she'll often answer how her earlobes feel fine--that is until recently when she started having trouble with one of them when the hole for wearing earrings started closing up on her!
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Best wishes!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this image which inspires this clever write and your poem had me in stitches Jim. What a delightful write.
I love these two lines, clever end rhymes and humour:
There won't be a mention of fibromyalgia.
I'll think of my youth then with quiet nostalgia,
You made me smile and I just love your imaginative rhymes, perfect flow and continuous humour, it has to be a six from me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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I love this image which inspires this clever write and your poem had me in stitches Jim. What a delightful write.
I love these two lines, clever end rhymes and humour:
There won't be a mention of fibromyalgia.
I'll think of my youth then with quiet nostalgia,
You made me smile and I just love your imaginative rhymes, perfect flow and continuous humour, it has to be a six from me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Oh, you are so kind, Dolly. Thank you very much!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post Jim, I love the earlobes. You're a very skilled poet my friend, the flow and the language are very well expressed, this is hilarious, and Aldo works well with the great theme, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : My earlobes are grand, you've changed the tense.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent post Jim, I love the earlobes. You're a very skilled poet my friend, the flow and the language are very well expressed, this is hilarious, and Aldo works well with the great theme, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : My earlobes are grand, you've changed the tense.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Roy. You're very kind. I'm curious what Aldo means?
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I think it might be a typo Jim