Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from papa55mike
That's one great thing about these dribble stories; you need a good twist at the end. What a wonderfully written story. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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That's one great thing about these dribble stories; you need a good twist at the end. What a wonderfully written story. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I love this piece. It really has an unexpected twist to the tale and the picture is excellent too. Perhaps it has a moral, be careful what you tell young children!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I love this piece. It really has an unexpected twist to the tale and the picture is excellent too. Perhaps it has a moral, be careful what you tell young children!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
Yikes! Ralphie did have a monster he conversed with. He must have known it was his mother that was in danger. I love that you were able to get your horror story into so few words. Good job.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Yikes! Ralphie did have a monster he conversed with. He must have known it was his mother that was in danger. I love that you were able to get your horror story into so few words. Good job.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review.