One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a very well written haiku. I love how each line contains a different word reflecting "thought." The picture and the use of color in the lines help to make this one outstanding.
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This is a very well written haiku. I love how each line contains a different word reflecting "thought." The picture and the use of color in the lines help to make this one outstanding.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Verna
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The sense of colour here is great and the whole presentation is thoughtful and charming! I find these short poems make you think more deeply as you have a few lines to concentrate on!
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The sense of colour here is great and the whole presentation is thoughtful and charming! I find these short poems make you think more deeply as you have a few lines to concentrate on!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Sarah
Thank you for noticing. Some people think that because it's short is not as good as a long one.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Best wishes from UK
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Good evening from pasadena, California, USA. (*÷*)
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I would love to go to California!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The Gulf of Mexico had numerous blue herons and they are a calming sight to sit and watch the world go by. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. I always enjoy reading.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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The Gulf of Mexico had numerous blue herons and they are a calming sight to sit and watch the world go by. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. I always enjoy reading.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your time and kind review
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This blue heron does look like its deep in thought. I wonder what she/he's thinking? Should I take a dip in the water? Find some fish to eat? Or should I remain calm?
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This blue heron does look like its deep in thought. I wonder what she/he's thinking? Should I take a dip in the water? Find some fish to eat? Or should I remain calm?
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Rosemary
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from patcelaw
The image that you chose for this and the words are a very good match. I appreciate all the times that you have shared with us. Your wonderful haiku have writings. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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The image that you chose for this and the words are a very good match. I appreciate all the times that you have shared with us. Your wonderful haiku have writings. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Patricia
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ahh, just looking at the photograph is peaceful and full of zen.
A great entry for the 3 line poem contest. This is a thoughtful
and calming read and one that should do well in the contest.
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Ahh, just looking at the photograph is peaceful and full of zen.
A great entry for the 3 line poem contest. This is a thoughtful
and calming read and one that should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I hope you are right. I love to win site contests... 100 dollars is a great prize :)
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I once saw a blue heron early in the morning at the water's edge at Beacon park in Lichfield. It was still and enjoying a moments peace. I felt calm and tranquil in that moment which is etched into my memory. You added an ambient tangerine pool to the scene here, magical, love Dolly x
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I once saw a blue heron early in the morning at the water's edge at Beacon park in Lichfield. It was still and enjoying a moments peace. I felt calm and tranquil in that moment which is etched into my memory. You added an ambient tangerine pool to the scene here, magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Dolly
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
You consistently put out quality poems I thoroughly enjoy! This poem is no different and reflects the sensitive soul you are full of words and colors. Great job!
I love the picture It's very pretty a perfect accompaniment to your poem!
So much talent our tonight and so hard sometimes to offer suggestions to beautiful work!..
Thank you hope you're having a great night!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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You consistently put out quality poems I thoroughly enjoy! This poem is no different and reflects the sensitive soul you are full of words and colors. Great job!
I love the picture It's very pretty a perfect accompaniment to your poem!
So much talent our tonight and so hard sometimes to offer suggestions to beautiful work!..
Thank you hope you're having a great night!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Lea, I am grateful for your time and exceptional review. Have a wonderful night.
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Comment from lyenochka
That's such a peaceful picture. You always find the best pictures! And I like the "thinking" words in every lives from "pensive" and "reflects" and finally, "meditate."
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That's such a peaceful picture. You always find the best pictures! And I like the "thinking" words in every lives from "pensive" and "reflects" and finally, "meditate."
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I'm happy you like it, Big Sister. I had fun with this one. I joined a health group that focus on meditation, among other things so I guess I had it in my ind. LoL
Thank you, Sister
Love ya
Marival ❤️
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I'm glad you are taking care of your health, Little Sis! 💞
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely poem with a picture that is a great match. We have one we see on our dock at sunrise sometimes, and pensive accurately describes what they seem to be doing.
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This is a lovely poem with a picture that is a great match. We have one we see on our dock at sunrise sometimes, and pensive accurately describes what they seem to be doing.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Carol,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.