Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Night Lights"Musing of an old man
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The form is demanding and you have managed the form really well. I have to say, I don't know why Keats thought the nightingale sang so well! I don't find its voice enthralling:!
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The form is demanding and you have managed the form really well. I have to say, I don't know why Keats thought the nightingale sang so well! I don't find its voice enthralling:!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Sarah, yes I agree, they tend to be quite shrill at times.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine scene painted in words here as the moon shimmers and gives of a silvery light that reflects into this bird's eyes, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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A fine scene painted in words here as the moon shimmers and gives of a silvery light that reflects into this bird's eyes, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from mermaids
Your words bring forth good feelings. The moon and sun provide light for the nightingale. It is as if they are working together. You have a light flow and feel in your words with a hint of the mystical.
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Your words bring forth good feelings. The moon and sun provide light for the nightingale. It is as if they are working together. You have a light flow and feel in your words with a hint of the mystical.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from w.j.debi
You create a mysterious mood with your Collum Lune and the shadowy moonlight presentation. Excellent theme.
Word count is correct.
Best of luck in the contest.
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You create a mysterious mood with your Collum Lune and the shadowy moonlight presentation. Excellent theme.
Word count is correct.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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w.j. Debi, thanks for your affirmation.
Comment from royowen
I've always known the syllable count lune, but nor this Kelly lune, so thank you for introducing to my eyes. They both do we well consecutively or side by side. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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I've always known the syllable count lune, but nor this Kelly lune, so thank you for introducing to my eyes. They both do we well consecutively or side by side. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Hi Roy, thank you.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully written and illustrated poem for the collom lune poetry contest. I see you have done a double one. A lovely theme of the nightingale.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
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Beautifully written and illustrated poem for the collom lune poetry contest. I see you have done a double one. A lovely theme of the nightingale.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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thanks for your review and comments.
Comment from Ricky1024
Illuminating and we'll written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
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Illuminating and we'll written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Kaiku
Very well done. You created two stanzas that flowed nicely. I am not familiar with this style so I don't know if two stanzas is common. Maybe you are setting a new bar. Good luck.
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Very well done. You created two stanzas that flowed nicely. I am not familiar with this style so I don't know if two stanzas is common. Maybe you are setting a new bar. Good luck.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you.