Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Love Matters"Musing of an old man
25 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Love does matter and is the most powerful force in the universe. It's a pity more people don't search for it. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Love does matter and is the most powerful force in the universe. It's a pity more people don't search for it. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Mike, thanks so much! I sure hope you have been in good health, haven't seen you around much?
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Love Matters, fulfills the requirements of this poor-cousin formatting of an abecedarian. Because of the framework limitations, your poem carries the message it can.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This poem, Love Matters, fulfills the requirements of this poor-cousin formatting of an abecedarian. Because of the framework limitations, your poem carries the message it can.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Bill, thanks, it is a tough one not to use verbs, adverbs, etc.
Comment from Terry Broxson
What an excellent entry for this contest, and good luck. I think it could do well. You have a wonderful flow and rhythm to the poem. I also like the way the message works in the sentence structure. Well-done. Terry.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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What an excellent entry for this contest, and good luck. I think it could do well. You have a wonderful flow and rhythm to the poem. I also like the way the message works in the sentence structure. Well-done. Terry.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Terry that ks for your validation.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the prompt directions,
and your choices of descriptive words for love.
-A good message about love and how it matters
in the beginning, and the impact love makes
in the next section with
"Undercurrents virtually whirling...
zooming abnormally back."
-You do a good job showing the many
emotions of love.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the prompt directions,
and your choices of descriptive words for love.
-A good message about love and how it matters
in the beginning, and the impact love makes
in the next section with
"Undercurrents virtually whirling...
zooming abnormally back."
-You do a good job showing the many
emotions of love.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Pam, as always, thank you for your review and comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual ABC poem for the contest, starting in the middle of the alphabet and ending with the beginning! You created a tense urgency to love here, the feeling of intoxication and foolishness that we feel when we are in love, I just loved your ABC, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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An unusual ABC poem for the contest, starting in the middle of the alphabet and ending with the beginning! You created a tense urgency to love here, the feeling of intoxication and foolishness that we feel when we are in love, I just loved your ABC, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Smiling back with a grateful heart. Have a splendid week! Jim