Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Unknowing"Musing of an old man
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Comment from Terry Broxson
I think this is a challenging contest. I do believe you accepted the challenge with an excellent entry and good luck. I also believe your message is a truism. We do not know what lies ahead. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I think this is a challenging contest. I do believe you accepted the challenge with an excellent entry and good luck. I also believe your message is a truism. We do not know what lies ahead. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Terry, thank you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We do know that we are not promised tomorrow. But is we're a Christian we do know what lies ahead because of God's promise to us. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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We do know that we are not promised tomorrow. But is we're a Christian we do know what lies ahead because of God's promise to us. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Barbara, thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, strong and creative. I pondered on these
words and know that , yes, death comes next for all of us as the author states. For me believing in the afterlife soothes my fears. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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The author's words are clear, strong and creative. I pondered on these
words and know that , yes, death comes next for all of us as the author states. For me believing in the afterlife soothes my fears. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Harmony, thanks!
Comment from Kaiku
Yep, nicely captured. We certainly can`t escape the inevitable. Are those tarot cards being held. At first I thought the eyes were of a cat but I believe they are of a fortune teller. Nice graphic.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Yep, nicely captured. We certainly can`t escape the inevitable. Are those tarot cards being held. At first I thought the eyes were of a cat but I believe they are of a fortune teller. Nice graphic.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Yes the fortune teller?
Comment from Mintybee
You followed the 5-7-5 format perfectly. It's a simple explanation of a common philosophy: life, death, unknown. It's always a good reminder to use our time wisely, as it is limited.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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You followed the 5-7-5 format perfectly. It's a simple explanation of a common philosophy: life, death, unknown. It's always a good reminder to use our time wisely, as it is limited.
Mintybee
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Yes, always a forethought never the after thought.
Comment from JT traveller
Fantastic poem. Clearly expressed in so few words. I particularly enjoyed your capitalisation of the word Know. It lends power and wisdom to your poem. An absolute rather than a supposition.
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Fantastic poem. Clearly expressed in so few words. I particularly enjoyed your capitalisation of the word Know. It lends power and wisdom to your poem. An absolute rather than a supposition.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Your validation makes me smile, my sincere thanks!
Comment from Harriett Ford
For poems about death, this is certainly the one that fulfills the mysterious title. We know not the time, but we who are Bible believers do know something about life after the event.
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For poems about death, this is certainly the one that fulfills the mysterious title. We know not the time, but we who are Bible believers do know something about life after the event.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Harriet, you are right on message, we whombe.I?ve know we just live on into eternity.