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Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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I love this poem. I feel as if you are speaking about my feelings for my daughter-in-laws. We are both so blessed. I love the verse and rhyme that flows so well. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
    On sweeti, I love hearing about others who have such a relationship with daughter in-love. My mother in-law wasn't the nicest person, so l always swore that would be the best I could be someday. I am happy you feel the same about yours. Thanks for sharing and for you lovely review, comments and six star gIfts! So appreciated my dear friend!
Comment from Carol Clark2
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What a sweet poem for your daughter-in-love (I love that title!) I like the idea of the bridge to connect your homes and your hearts, and I'm glad your grandsons still like to visit their grandparents. Beautiful photograph!
Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Hi Carol, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Aussie
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What a beautiful story about your family. Bridges normally hover over rivers. Your son and daughter-in-law married on the bridge made your life whole. So blessed with your grandsons. Well done and much love involved. K xx

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
    K, you are sweet! My grandsons couldn't have walked over because there's normally lots of traffic on the road, but also water in the Creek, so that bridge is old fashioned rounded bridge w character. My son was quite the carpenter! Thanks for your lovely comments, my very dear friend!


    Actually Thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from karenina
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There is something so special about developing a close and loving relationship with a daughter-in-law, or son-in-law. I know I adore my own like they are my own children and THAT makes all the difference, especially when it comes to forming those all-important bonds with the grandchildren! How great they live next door ~ with a bridge! That is truly a special blessing!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Karenina, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my very sweet friend
Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a very precious poem you have penned about your son, his wife and their children. It is a blessing to have them so close to you and your husband. Beautiful picture of two beautiful people in your family! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Teri, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Love this. The bridge is such a pivotal thing. Both physical and spiritual. Bridging the two separate entities and joint the generations. Your poetry reveals so much about your relationship with your family. You show its importance in your many poems. These are lovely to read. Gretchen

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Gretchen, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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This gave me goosebumps. Although you have many challenges in your life, you are truly blessed with a wonderful family. And it's extra special that they live so close.

Your poems are always a joy to read. The meter is spot on and you choose wonderful rhyming words. Hugs, Lilly

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi my sweet Lily, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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These are truly beautiful words from a mother-in-law to her son's wife. I feel the same about my daughter-in-law and son-in-law. From daughter-in-law came two daughters, and from our daughter, two handsome sons. We're thankful for the parenting both families have done. And now we have two grandsons-in-law, two granddaughters-in-law, and 5 great grandchildren, with another due in April. God is good!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Verna, thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my poem for my sweet Melanie!
    I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from royowen
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What a lovely post. When I first came to fanstory I had already been writing for my family, poems I hoped would one day encourage and propel my grandkid into fulfilling God's purpose in their lives, and my dear children too, for we are fulfilled in the generations, that is God's purpose and His plan, my sons in law are the perfect choices for my girls, and I'm so grateful to God. Beautifully written Debi, congratulations, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Roy, thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my Melanie poem.
    I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
reply by royowen on 08-Jan-2023
    Well done Debi
Comment from susand3022
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I love this, Debi...
Makes me wish I hadn't used all my 6's already! I really think that FS needs to give us more than 6. People are just too good now.
This one is a keeper for sure, your daughter (in-law) must love it. It's very sweet. I love the idea of the bridge. I think that someday, one of your grandchildren will move into your house, and their kids will use the bridge to go visit their grandparents! ;)
Susan :)

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Susan, thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my Melanie poem.
    I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!