Shades of Empty
A rewrite of Sound of Silence by Simon and GarfunkelGarfun21 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is very nice. I listened to the original, just to get the background music playing in my mind. Your new lyrics fit, and gives a bit of a darker tone and quality to it.
Good work and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This is very nice. I listened to the original, just to get the background music playing in my mind. Your new lyrics fit, and gives a bit of a darker tone and quality to it.
Good work and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the review and comments. It was fun to write even though I'm not sure I understand mine any better than the original.