The Tree
Trees live in all seasons.27 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed - our trees are so precious to us and our lives on the planet - a lovely tribute here to their presence in our midst and their seasonal changes
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Yes indeed - our trees are so precious to us and our lives on the planet - a lovely tribute here to their presence in our midst and their seasonal changes
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Wow, Thanks for the six stars. Yes, trees are precious in so many ways. The poem actually ran in second. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Barry Penfold
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Gracious in the word play that creates a real-to-life story. It works as well as any read today. Well done. ..........................................................................................
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Gracious in the word play that creates a real-to-life story. It works as well as any read today. Well done. ..........................................................................................
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Tom,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. It ran in second so I am happy. Take care and have a great day.
Barry Penfold
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
I love to hug trees and listen to the leaves whisper in the breeze.
I m blessed because I m surrounded by woods and pine forests.
I enjoyed reading your poem : each season these giants gift us new emotions.
My favourite season is autumn , love those warm red and orange leaves.
I wrote my first poem in July 2018 and it was about Trees ( see below , no need to review).
https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=904926
Ciao!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Ciao poet!
I love to hug trees and listen to the leaves whisper in the breeze.
I m blessed because I m surrounded by woods and pine forests.
I enjoyed reading your poem : each season these giants gift us new emotions.
My favourite season is autumn , love those warm red and orange leaves.
I wrote my first poem in July 2018 and it was about Trees ( see below , no need to review).
https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=904926
Ciao!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.Sounds as though you are living in a beautiful place. Plenty of trees. Yes autumn is a great time of year, although there have been a lot of floods this year. I am from Australia. I will make sure I read your poem.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment from poetwatch
We are like a tree, author. :) We grow to fill the skies with love from our hearts and nest within our arms the many children that nourish from that love. We wither with the coming age as winter sets upon our shoulders and see the future through our children's eyes. I love trees. This is a good entry for the 10 Line Poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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We are like a tree, author. :) We grow to fill the skies with love from our hearts and nest within our arms the many children that nourish from that love. We wither with the coming age as winter sets upon our shoulders and see the future through our children's eyes. I love trees. This is a good entry for the 10 Line Poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem.Glad you enjoyed it. Please take care and have a great day. The poem ran into second place. Thanks again.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem about a tree for the 10 lined poem contest. The rhyme scheme is good. The message is well stated, and one can see the care you took in writing it.
However, the text needs to be larger, and your poem box expanded. Drop the first line of the poem down one space. Go to the last word of the poem and after it hit enter twice. This will make your poem box larger and enhance your presentation. The it's in the last line is for the contraction ~it is. You need to change it to its~ the possessive pronoun. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is a good poem about a tree for the 10 lined poem contest. The rhyme scheme is good. The message is well stated, and one can see the care you took in writing it.
However, the text needs to be larger, and your poem box expanded. Drop the first line of the poem down one space. Go to the last word of the poem and after it hit enter twice. This will make your poem box larger and enhance your presentation. The it's in the last line is for the contraction ~it is. You need to change it to its~ the possessive pronoun. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Sandra,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Also thanks for your suggestions. I will give it a go. The poem came in second so I am happy. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Congrats! You had a good entry. You are welcome for the review.
Comment from papa55mike
If it wasn't for trees our air would be too toxic for humans to breathe. We would miss the brilliant colors in Autumn. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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If it wasn't for trees our air would be too toxic for humans to breathe. We would miss the brilliant colors in Autumn. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. It came second so I was pretty happy with that. Yes we owe a lot to trees for sure. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Moon baby
I think this is a beautiful poem that flows from line to line, except the last line. You chose a beautiful tree for your artwork, perfect for this poem. Maybe it's just me, but the last line needs more of a ring with glory.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I think this is a beautiful poem that flows from line to line, except the last line. You chose a beautiful tree for your artwork, perfect for this poem. Maybe it's just me, but the last line needs more of a ring with glory.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Wow, six stars. Thanks very much. Really glad you enjoyed the poem. It ran in second in the contest. Thanks also for your suggestion.
Take care and have a great day.
Barry Penfold
