Hope
The power of hope47 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
That's a very well-written and thoughtful, beautiful poem. You have chosen an excellent theme and developed it well, with smooth rhyme and metre. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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That's a very well-written and thoughtful, beautiful poem. You have chosen an excellent theme and developed it well, with smooth rhyme and metre. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate your great review comments.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a powerful and moving poem about hope and the need for us to all have something to aspire too. I like the following stanza the best
absent of hope, can a man find his way?
How hard will he work with no promise of pay?
How long is the night, as you wait the dawn of day?
Man suffers the darkness when light has gone away.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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a powerful and moving poem about hope and the need for us to all have something to aspire too. I like the following stanza the best
absent of hope, can a man find his way?
How hard will he work with no promise of pay?
How long is the night, as you wait the dawn of day?
Man suffers the darkness when light has gone away.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I wrote that from my heart.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Where are we without hope? Lost no doubt as you conveyed so beautifully with your words. I enjoyed your poem, the way you posed questions and how you asked and then answered with another question to get your point across. I also like and agree with your notes and that we all need to put in the effort also.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Where are we without hope? Lost no doubt as you conveyed so beautifully with your words. I enjoyed your poem, the way you posed questions and how you asked and then answered with another question to get your point across. I also like and agree with your notes and that we all need to put in the effort also.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from June Sargent
Without hope life would be dismal indeed. The stars shine brightest on the darkest of nights. We just need to look up and follow our dreams. Thanks for an inspiring piece.
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Without hope life would be dismal indeed. The stars shine brightest on the darkest of nights. We just need to look up and follow our dreams. Thanks for an inspiring piece.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for an inspiring review.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I really enjoyed this poem. The first stanza immediately grabbed me and, from there, each stanza built nicely on everything that had come prior. Well executed.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I really enjoyed this poem. The first stanza immediately grabbed me and, from there, each stanza built nicely on everything that had come prior. Well executed.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you. Your review comments touched my heart.
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you nomi for your insight and message of Hope.
Excellent rhyme and great artwork to compliment your poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you nomi for your insight and message of Hope.
Excellent rhyme and great artwork to compliment your poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you Janet. You are much appreciated.
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Very well written. Thank you for sharing I enjoyed the message.
The font seemed a bit too small. Sorry, but I did not quite understand the illustration. Good Luck
Write On and keep sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Very well written. Thank you for sharing I enjoyed the message.
The font seemed a bit too small. Sorry, but I did not quite understand the illustration. Good Luck
Write On and keep sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review. The illustration is of a man standing at the tip of a mountain.
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Oh, thank you for clarifying.
I love that, beautiful.
If you wish to, please read my new on. THE LOTUS
I did not enter a contest, I wrote it for my friends on FS.
Write On
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I will most certainly read it right away.
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Allow your Lotus to Bloom, friend!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wise and spot-on, deep and heartfelt, this poem definitely made me pause and think and explore...exactly what GOOD poetry does! So, thank you for the excellent read. It's also presented visually as beautifully as it rolls off my tongue (I always read poetry out loud because I know that's the only way good poetry makes sense.)
Thank you for this wonderful read this evening.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Wise and spot-on, deep and heartfelt, this poem definitely made me pause and think and explore...exactly what GOOD poetry does! So, thank you for the excellent read. It's also presented visually as beautifully as it rolls off my tongue (I always read poetry out loud because I know that's the only way good poetry makes sense.)
Thank you for this wonderful read this evening.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind and generous response to my words.
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Pantygynt
These four monorhyming quatrains praising hope, raise important attributes. We are told that the greatest of the three is charity, but I agree that without hope we are lost.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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These four monorhyming quatrains praising hope, raise important attributes. We are told that the greatest of the three is charity, but I agree that without hope we are lost.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you old friend. I always welcome your assessment of my work. I look to you for a hint of whether I am going in the proper direction or not.
Comment from Terry Broxson
A beautiful poem. It has a lot of insight and a lot of depth. I salute your intelligence and ability to put this together. I wish I had that talent. Outstanding job. Terry.
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A beautiful poem. It has a lot of insight and a lot of depth. I salute your intelligence and ability to put this together. I wish I had that talent. Outstanding job. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Please believe me, your talents are sufficient for any writer to be envious of you. I know that I certainly am. I thank you for your kind and generous review.
