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Unfathomable You

A poem

40 total reviews 
Comment from judiverse
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This is a lovely presentation. The free verse is a departure for you, but you handled it beautifully. I like your use of questions. They ask whether God's love and power has any boundaries and if its depths are unfathomable. God is undestructible, the power of the universe. The narrator states that he is loved by God, even though he is unworthy. judi

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Judi, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by judiverse on 06-Nov-2022
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Well written, Roy. Truly we cannot find the words to describe the greatness of God's love. It is far beyond what our human minds can comprehend. So glad His love is extended to all who will accept it.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Anne, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 06-Nov-2022
    You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Raul, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Raul1 on 05-Nov-2022
    You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, there is no greater love than that of God, Roy.
Your poem had a clear and true message. It's there
for all of us--undeserved--yet we can become saved
and know it's true meaning. I liked the image you paired
with your meaningful poem.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Jan. for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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Dear Roy, he totally rocked my Friday with this beauty. How wonderful that you think of the love of God as the ultimate love in life. I'm so grateful for His love and hot the forgiveness of my sins. Thank you for sharing. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day, Sally XOs

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Sal, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and presentation, Roy.
-I like the opening two lines addressing God,
and creation of the universe.
-You ask very good questions for which
the answer might be 'boundless,' 'infinite,' or limitless.
-I also like the two closing lines about not being "bought or enslaved."
-I liked the poem and the style.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Pam, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Nov-2022
    You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from scongrove
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Another outstanding post, my friend :) I wish I had a six for this. Although, all your poems are worthy of a ten. I loved the way you describe the love God has for us. This is very inspiring to read this morning!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much for your fantastic encouragement Shana,
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Roy,
Yes we are all undeserving of such love, but we have it, if we accept it.
Sometimes we forget we are not his only creations, but the whole universe is.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Joan, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by dragonpoet on 05-Nov-2022
    You're welcome on both accounts, Roy.
    Have a great Sunday,
    Joan
Comment from June Sargent
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We do need to be reminded constantly of God's grace and generosity when he gifted us with the sacrifice of His Son so that we might gain life. Undeserved kindness that should inspire us to be as forgiving.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks June, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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so this is God speaking, as to each of us, individually? Lovely thought, and unarguably believeable for He has looked after me despite the mistakes made. Be well.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Tom, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy