Pantygynt's Passion
Rhyming verse50 total reviews
Comment from Carolann Renaud
I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed very well and told a good story. It brought such good imagery to me with its words, Though you did choose a great picture to go along with it. Thank you for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed very well and told a good story. It brought such good imagery to me with its words, Though you did choose a great picture to go along with it. Thank you for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Carolann. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such a pleasure to read, Melissa!
And what a wonderful opportunity for FanStory members to increase their poetic knowledge and abilities.
Hopefully, I shall be able to take one of Jim's classes someday...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Such a pleasure to read, Melissa!
And what a wonderful opportunity for FanStory members to increase their poetic knowledge and abilities.
Hopefully, I shall be able to take one of Jim's classes someday...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Diane. So glad you liked it and thanks so much! I want to also say a big congrats!! for your poem placing at the top of the October list... it was so well written and moving. Great job on it. You deserved it.
Melissa
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Much appreciation, Melissa!
From the heart...
Thank you!
diane
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I have nothing to critique. I found myself smiling from the first stanza to the last. The meter is perfect. You've managed to write a most enjoyable little work. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I have nothing to critique. I found myself smiling from the first stanza to the last. The meter is perfect. You've managed to write a most enjoyable little work. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello! Thank you so very much for your wonderful review and comments. I am so glad you liked it! :)
Melissa
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a fun piece that does a good job of not just advertising and sharing the worth of these courses, but showing your own joy in having benefitted. It was a pleasure to read.
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is a fun piece that does a good job of not just advertising and sharing the worth of these courses, but showing your own joy in having benefitted. It was a pleasure to read.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Mike. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This is a smoothly metered and well rhymed poem which showcases how talented and giving Panygynt is. I have read some of his works and have enjoyed them. I haven't taken a class on the site yet because I still work 30 hours a week.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hi Melissa,
This is a smoothly metered and well rhymed poem which showcases how talented and giving Panygynt is. I have read some of his works and have enjoyed them. I haven't taken a class on the site yet because I still work 30 hours a week.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Joan. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
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You're very welcome, Melissa.
You did that.
Joan
Comment from kiwisteveh
Thanks for posting this entertaining and informative 'blurb' about Jim, his nature and his classes. I am sure it will be of interest to many.
Your iambic tetrameter lines are written if flowing, pleasant verse with excellent aabb rhyming. A pleasure to read!
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks for posting this entertaining and informative 'blurb' about Jim, his nature and his classes. I am sure it will be of interest to many.
Your iambic tetrameter lines are written if flowing, pleasant verse with excellent aabb rhyming. A pleasure to read!
Steve
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Steve. I am so glad you liked it. I just wanted to get the word out about the class. His courses have always been fun and a great help to me. :)
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Living in a place like that, who wouldn't be inspired to write? Your poem is lovely and the presentation is excellent. Your rhyme is graceful. You not only describe how Pantygynt uses his own writing ability to teach others poetry writing. Encouragement is so important. and it seems he gives that. I've never taken a course on FS, but Pantygynt must be an excellent teacher. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Living in a place like that, who wouldn't be inspired to write? Your poem is lovely and the presentation is excellent. Your rhyme is graceful. You not only describe how Pantygynt uses his own writing ability to teach others poetry writing. Encouragement is so important. and it seems he gives that. I've never taken a course on FS, but Pantygynt must be an excellent teacher. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hi Judi. Thank you very much. Yes, I have always thought Jim is an excellent teacher. He's very patient and thoughtful to newbies and those struggling to grasp metric forms. I really appreciate your comments and review, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Living in a place like that, who wouldn't be inspired to write? Your poem is lovely and the presentation is excellent. Your rhyme is graceful. You not only describe how Pantygynt uses his own writing ability to teach others poetry writing. Encouragement is so important. and it seems he gives that. I've never taken a course on FS, but Pantygynt must be an excellent teacher. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Living in a place like that, who wouldn't be inspired to write? Your poem is lovely and the presentation is excellent. Your rhyme is graceful. You not only describe how Pantygynt uses his own writing ability to teach others poetry writing. Encouragement is so important. and it seems he gives that. I've never taken a course on FS, but Pantygynt must be an excellent teacher. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hi Judi. Thank you very much!!! I really appreciate your lovely words and comments. Hugs!
Melissa
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You're welcome. Sounds like you've really enjoyed his classes. judi
Comment from Ulla
Oh Melissa, what a wonderful job you're doing here to promote the class Jim is soon starting. He must be so pleased with that. I know you have followed several of his classes and be benifitted hugely. Such a wonderful poem you've written. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Oh Melissa, what a wonderful job you're doing here to promote the class Jim is soon starting. He must be so pleased with that. I know you have followed several of his classes and be benifitted hugely. Such a wonderful poem you've written. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Ulla. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a clever way to promote Jim's class. I thought his competition has finished. I guess he didn't get many applicants. I have signed it up a while ago. I hope you did, too eve though you don 't need to. I recently suggested meter errors and corrections to Jim (JDR)'s sonnets. He took my suggestion.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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What a clever way to promote Jim's class. I thought his competition has finished. I guess he didn't get many applicants. I have signed it up a while ago. I hope you did, too eve though you don 't need to. I recently suggested meter errors and corrections to Jim (JDR)'s sonnets. He took my suggestion.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hey girl. Thank you for your wonderful review. I look forward to taking Meter class with you in a few weeks. Hugs, sweet Lisa!
Melissa
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SUre. I'm looking forward to it.
