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Do good and feel good poems

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Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a very precious and sweet poem you have penned for your beautiful granddaughter, Clarabelle Christine. You used very loving words that touch the heart. I am so sorry you couldn't be there, and I hope you are feeling better very soon! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    On Teri you just couldn't be any sweeter. Thank you so much for your lovely words for my Clara and her poem. I also appreciate all the prayers that a know you have been saying. You are truly one of my favorite people ever.. Much love to you my sweet friend.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another great personal poem about your grand children. the love for them shines through out this heartfelt poem about what is important to us all family ties

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much take for such kind words for my granddaughter Clara and the poem I wrote for her. I appreciate your thoughtfulness my very dear friend.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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This is a lovely poem, Debi. It's a darn shame you're stuck in the house with Covid, but I know ClaraBelle can feel your love from afar.

The presentation is lovely and compliments your well written poem.

Blessings, Lilly

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much Lily, for your lovely comments for my granddaughter Clara and her poem. As always, you are so sweet. I appreciate your kindness so very much, my very dear friend.

    Thanks again.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi.
This is a wonderful poem which show your faith along with your grand- daughter's. It is a good Confirmation present to her. It shows how a grand mother, as well as a mother, has no favorite stage of life. Each one is interesting in its own right.
May your prayers come true.
I think the comma in the line about prayer should be after grandma and not daily.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Joan for the lovely words for my poem and for my Clara.
    You are always so sweet and I appreciate your kind words more than I can possibly tell you. Thanks also for the feedback about where the comma belongs. Whenever I write poems for my family I always place the comma to keep the rhythm, yet I know isn't the right way to do it. Even for a comma queen like myself. So I.did go edit it and put it where it belongs. Thanks again my sweet friend!
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Nov-2022
    You're most kindly welcome, Debi. I could never be called a comma Queen or Editing Empress.
    Joan
Comment from royowen
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I can remember when my daughters were baptised, Bec at only seven years old, and she's a wife and mum now, but full of the love and grace of God, adoring Jesus, and Catherine my younger daughter baptised at sixteen, and a beautiful, godly, wife mum a wife, and my young granddaughter Indah, spontaneously and with many tears receiving Christ in baptism at 10, such joy, well done to ClaraBelle, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Awe Roy, I am always so happy to hear your very kind words and love hearing about your lovely family. I believe that Clara will keep her faith and stay strong in it. Thanks again my thoughtful friend
reply by royowen on 02-Nov-2022
    Don?t you love it? Seeing them bloom in Christ,
Comment from Heather Knight
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Hello Debi,
What a special present you've given your granddaughter!
My son got confirmed a couple of years ago and it was an unforgettable day.
BTW, her name is beautiful and she looks cute in the picture.
Do get better soon. x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Heather I truly appreciate your lovely comments for my Clara and her poem.
    You are just always so sweet. Thank you also for the generous gift of six stars. You are so thoughtful and I appreciate it so very much my very dear friend!
reply by Heather Knight on 05-Nov-2022
    Well-deserved and she truly looks cute in the pic you chose.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thank you my sweet and dear friend.
Comment from Ulla
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Aw, Debi she is a precious girl, and I can see why you love that photo of so very much. She's gorgeous. I will be looking forward to the confirmation pictures. I loved your poem. Get well soon. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    As always Ulla, you are so incredibly sweet. Thank you for lovely words and being so kind and thoughtful regarding my sweet Clara and my poem.
    And also your well wishes.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this special day with us. I will pray for God's willing hand on her for the rest of her life. Along with that, I will pray for your recovery from surgery and COVID. Sending love and prayers.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    I Thank you so much Barb, for your kind review and lovely comments for my granddaughter Clara and her poem. I appreciate it so very much my very dear friend : } Thanks again for the Prayers and kind comments too,
Comment from Michael Cassar
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Confirmation is one of the unique days of a child christian life. Although a teenager might not understand its intrinsic value, later she will become fully cognizant of such commitment Such a beautiful poem receiving her into your religious fold.
I'm sorry you were preclude from this event because of COViD. How you are doing well and wish you a quick recovery. Michael

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Michael, t thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments for my granddaughter Clara and her poem. I appreciate it so very much my very dear friend. .Thanks again my dear friend! I am a little bit better each day. Thank you for your well wishes too!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Awe. I love this. The picture shows nothing but joy on her face. This rhyming poem was so natural. I never felt any lines were forced to rhyme. It was a beautiful, special poem that I know she will live forever. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
    Grethen,
    t thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments for my granddaughter Clara and her poem. I appreciate it so very much my very dear friend. .Thanks agsin!