Raindrops
A quatern.40 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful. The questions ee have without answers. There is no way to answer these. Time still continues. The past cannot be erased. We just find new clouds to wonder about. Life remains a mystery. Beautiful and thought provoking. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Beautiful. The questions ee have without answers. There is no way to answer these. Time still continues. The past cannot be erased. We just find new clouds to wonder about. Life remains a mystery. Beautiful and thought provoking. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Gretchen, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
I enjoyed this one, Roy :) Love the scenery too! Your styles are always so interesting to read. Your imagination in putting words together always amazes me. Thanks for sharing. And thanks for mentioning me to another member here. You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this one, Roy :) Love the scenery too! Your styles are always so interesting to read. Your imagination in putting words together always amazes me. Thanks for sharing. And thanks for mentioning me to another member here. You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much dear Shana. for these excellent commenters
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful picture of the clouds from above, Roy. You definitely asked a lot of questions in this poem, every sentence became a new question. It truly made me think on this awhile? Blessings.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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What a wonderful picture of the clouds from above, Roy. You definitely asked a lot of questions in this poem, every sentence became a new question. It truly made me think on this awhile? Blessings.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Alie, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I REALLY like quaterns; yours is excellent--skillfully written, deep, and thought-provoking. There are so many questions surrounding this life.
Some will never answered down here.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I REALLY like quaterns; yours is excellent--skillfully written, deep, and thought-provoking. There are so many questions surrounding this life.
Some will never answered down here.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Janice, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Laurie Holding
Oh, wow. This is the second of yours I've read this week, I think, but I just couldn't NOT. This is beautiful and perfect in its poetic restraints, and I commend you. I'm not sure if the system will accept my six stars, as I might have run out this week, but you deserve them. Thanks for this one.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Oh, wow. This is the second of yours I've read this week, I think, but I just couldn't NOT. This is beautiful and perfect in its poetic restraints, and I commend you. I'm not sure if the system will accept my six stars, as I might have run out this week, but you deserve them. Thanks for this one.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Laurie, for these fantastic comments and a super, review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think all of us has asked and pondered those questions many times and yet no answers. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written statement on mankind. Yet, God still loves us.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I think all of us has asked and pondered those questions many times and yet no answers. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written statement on mankind. Yet, God still loves us.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Barbara, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Ray, your poem is thought provoking and asks questions that many of u think about from time to time. Of special note:
How many men will sin still stain.
(As long as Man has free will, there will be sin. Perhaps, the end of time will come when Man sins no more--how beautiful would that be!)
Beautiful photo choice. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer ~ Margaret
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Hi Ray, your poem is thought provoking and asks questions that many of u think about from time to time. Of special note:
How many men will sin still stain.
(As long as Man has free will, there will be sin. Perhaps, the end of time will come when Man sins no more--how beautiful would that be!)
Beautiful photo choice. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer ~ Margaret
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Margaret, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
This well written quaternary uses a child's curious questioning to lead human to darker questions we all ask as adults and want answers to. Working in faith is the answer to most.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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This well written quaternary uses a child's curious questioning to lead human to darker questions we all ask as adults and want answers to. Working in faith is the answer to most.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
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Don't mention it, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Clever. A question though ... where has this piece been since Jan '21?
has it been a W.I.P.? Saved for a rainy day? I have such a file when I cannot find a contest just right to match its power. Be well.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Clever. A question though ... where has this piece been since Jan '21?
has it been a W.I.P.? Saved for a rainy day? I have such a file when I cannot find a contest just right to match its power. Be well.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I have a large backlog Thanks so much Tom, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Aussie
How many raindrops in a cloud? We cannot count the numbers of misdemeanors man has committed. Some animals, many creatures have suffered at the cruelty of man. God gave us the creatures for food but man has used them for sport. Your poem is so different to what you usually pen. "We, like sheep have gone astray." I'm glad we belong to Him. K xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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How many raindrops in a cloud? We cannot count the numbers of misdemeanors man has committed. Some animals, many creatures have suffered at the cruelty of man. God gave us the creatures for food but man has used them for sport. Your poem is so different to what you usually pen. "We, like sheep have gone astray." I'm glad we belong to Him. K xx
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Kay, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy