Magical
Lune poetry40 total reviews
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I very much enjoyed this lune poem. "Bewitching" is a fantastic word choice. I assume you found the picture and then drafted the lune? It captures the spirit of your poem perfectly.
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I very much enjoyed this lune poem. "Bewitching" is a fantastic word choice. I assume you found the picture and then drafted the lune? It captures the spirit of your poem perfectly.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Charles, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Uh, I loved this dreamlike Lune poem, Melissa which you've written for the contest. The imagery is so lovely, It gave me room to dream a bit. All the best of luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
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Uh, I loved this dreamlike Lune poem, Melissa which you've written for the contest. The imagery is so lovely, It gave me room to dream a bit. All the best of luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Ulla, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
This is a perfect example of how effective a Lune poem is with your well-written words. IMHO your choice of an illustration just elevated your overall presentation value to the FS community.
I will bat my eyes at this post (-;
Mark
P.S. Not quite sure your initial cap is necessary. I prefer KISS for all my short poems.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Melissa,
This is a perfect example of how effective a Lune poem is with your well-written words. IMHO your choice of an illustration just elevated your overall presentation value to the FS community.
I will bat my eyes at this post (-;
Mark
P.S. Not quite sure your initial cap is necessary. I prefer KISS for all my short poems.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Mark, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a perfect lune! Your syllable count is good, of course, and your shape is perfect. Even your theme and artwork are lune related. It's your word choice that is the best though. Stardust on lashes-Wow! What a delightful thought. That's what I try to scatter every time that I put my grandchildren to sleep. I'm putting 3 to bed tonight. I am going to tell them that I am scattering stardust on their lashes. What a way to go to sleep.
Clearly, I really like your lune.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a perfect lune! Your syllable count is good, of course, and your shape is perfect. Even your theme and artwork are lune related. It's your word choice that is the best though. Stardust on lashes-Wow! What a delightful thought. That's what I try to scatter every time that I put my grandchildren to sleep. I'm putting 3 to bed tonight. I am going to tell them that I am scattering stardust on their lashes. What a way to go to sleep.
Clearly, I really like your lune.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Debbie, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
I usually don't review many short ones, but you have a good here, Melissa. You have chosen a very appropriate picture to go with your poem. Good luck in the contest.
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I usually don't review many short ones, but you have a good here, Melissa. You have chosen a very appropriate picture to go with your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Paul, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, I am curious about where you found this lovely picture. It adds so much to the Lune poem you wrote. I love the stardust reference you make in your wonderful poem. Thank you for writing such a terrific piece.
Have a great upcoming weekend, my friend!
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Wow, I am curious about where you found this lovely picture. It adds so much to the Lune poem you wrote. I love the stardust reference you make in your wonderful poem. Thank you for writing such a terrific piece.
Have a great upcoming weekend, my friend!
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Jesse, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Such a whimsical and magical piece. I love it! If only we could have stardust sprinkled on us at night to magically make the stresses of the day disappear - so we can dream...
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Such a whimsical and magical piece. I love it! If only we could have stardust sprinkled on us at night to magically make the stresses of the day disappear - so we can dream...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, June, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
This is not only a lovely statement in the ideal format but it also has a nocturnal setting, so the moon is present appropriately throughout this short piece.
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This is not only a lovely statement in the ideal format but it also has a nocturnal setting, so the moon is present appropriately throughout this short piece.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Jim, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
"Bewitching" conjures up enchanting adventures in sleep and my dreams are always more practical and down to earth and I could do with some of that stardust, much enjoyed Melissa, definitely magical, love Dolly x
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"Bewitching" conjures up enchanting adventures in sleep and my dreams are always more practical and down to earth and I could do with some of that stardust, much enjoyed Melissa, definitely magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely image with the same soft lyrical quality as your Lune. You chose a great title, linking well with stardust and bewitching. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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Lovely image with the same soft lyrical quality as your Lune. You chose a great title, linking well with stardust and bewitching. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa