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Comment from Douglas Goff
The presentation of this is awesome! The picture and script, plus background match up perfectly.
The writing is good and colorful, plus flows nicely.
Good work poet!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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The presentation of this is awesome! The picture and script, plus background match up perfectly.
The writing is good and colorful, plus flows nicely.
Good work poet!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Douglas, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from Ulla
This is a wonderful poem dedicated to Sally Law. I love the owl and especially at this time of the year I listen out for it. I wish you all the best in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a wonderful poem dedicated to Sally Law. I love the owl and especially at this time of the year I listen out for it. I wish you all the best in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Ulla, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a vibrant and beautiful poem in recognition of the writing talents of Sally.
-You have captured her flair and vibrancy in her writing style.
-Your poem reflects the character and kind, spirited writing that comes out in her poems and stories.
An amazing bird is Sal. You have captured her tones in your writing. More than excellent!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a vibrant and beautiful poem in recognition of the writing talents of Sally.
-You have captured her flair and vibrancy in her writing style.
-Your poem reflects the character and kind, spirited writing that comes out in her poems and stories.
An amazing bird is Sal. You have captured her tones in your writing. More than excellent!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Marien, for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. Also for your very generous six stars. That means so much to me! This was so much fun I may need to try them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice dedication and circus poem for Sally Law.
Excellent entry for the This One's Faux You contest. You grasped the rules well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Nice dedication and circus poem for Sally Law.
Excellent entry for the This One's Faux You contest. You grasped the rules well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Gypsy, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from Laurie Holding
I loved the way you played with your rhyme scheme on this one, and while I don't yet know Sally's work, this makes me want to look her up! The only constructive criticism I'd offer you would be on your font; if you change this to a non-cursive font, it would be way easier to read. (I don't know, though--maybe Sally always uses flowery fonts, in which case you'd want to keep it.) Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I loved the way you played with your rhyme scheme on this one, and while I don't yet know Sally's work, this makes me want to look her up! The only constructive criticism I'd offer you would be on your font; if you change this to a non-cursive font, it would be way easier to read. (I don't know, though--maybe Sally always uses flowery fonts, in which case you'd want to keep it.) Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Laurie, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from Liz Westfall
I love that owl picture and how you described it so vibrantly. I had never heard of a circus poem, so this was new to me. I enjoyed the flow of your piece as well.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I love that owl picture and how you described it so vibrantly. I had never heard of a circus poem, so this was new to me. I enjoyed the flow of your piece as well.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Liz, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was like a banquet of words. I saw vibrant colors, enchanted being, fun all around. He wanted to be part of something larger just not the center of attention for being unique. Loved, loved, loved this. The rhythm was great. No spags that I could see but I was so swept up in this magical poem I didn't notice. Great job. Gretchen
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This was like a banquet of words. I saw vibrant colors, enchanted being, fun all around. He wanted to be part of something larger just not the center of attention for being unique. Loved, loved, loved this. The rhythm was great. No spags that I could see but I was so swept up in this magical poem I didn't notice. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Gretchen, for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. Also for your very generous six stars. That means so much to me! This was so much fun I may need to try them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
Comment from Fleedleflump
You've packed this with brilliant descriptive language and poetic vibrance to suit your subject. I like that, as with all things, a change was needed, and love that you close on a pun. I very much enjoyed the read :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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You've packed this with brilliant descriptive language and poetic vibrance to suit your subject. I like that, as with all things, a change was needed, and love that you close on a pun. I very much enjoyed the read :-)
Mike
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Mike, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful tribute to Sally and so appropriate as her imagination is ignited by colour behind her eyes as she recalls these scenes but cannot actually see them, I loved your poem filled with the magic of the majestic owl, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a beautiful tribute to Sally and so appropriate as her imagination is ignited by colour behind her eyes as she recalls these scenes but cannot actually see them, I loved your poem filled with the magic of the majestic owl, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Dolly, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I don't know how this poem is related to Sally Law's style, but this is a good poem. The font size is great. The swirly font fits the visual and message. The message is clearly presented. The owl is wonderful and colorful. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I don't know how this poem is related to Sally Law's style, but this is a good poem. The font size is great. The swirly font fits the visual and message. The message is clearly presented. The owl is wonderful and colorful. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Sandra,, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
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You are welcome.