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Comment from rspoet
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Hello Sandra,
This is a great way to include your readers in the decision;
Time-Travelling Rectifiers is an excellent title too.
With two popular characters, it's hard to go wrong,
but usually, there is one 'eccentric' character like Bessie and Margot,
Mildred and Veronica, Holmes and Watson, Laurel and Hardy, Abbot and Costello... so you'll have be careful about sharing space between two.
But I think you're up to it, so I say "go for it." Double trouble is double fun.
Best wishes.
Robert




 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Robert. I said to Pam I wondered what you'd think. Pam liked the idea, as have everyone else. I can see what you mean about the two like-minded characters, but I'm hoping with Mildred being the 'careful' warm-hearted type, and Bessie being the wise one with a good sense of fun, they will complement each other. They are both good people so I'm crossing my fingers I can pull this off.
    Thank you for that golden star, my friend, and the positive review in favour of Mildred's idea. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh how delightful that you are engaging your fans in your decision, Sandra! Thank you for bringing this up for our vote. I think it's a wonderful idea that Mildred and Bessie work together!

This seems to be just a plural not a possessive:
"Time Travelling Detective's" (Detectives)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    I was really stumped, Helen. So many of Mildred's fans have been on at me to bring her back, then I wrote The Return, and I've been asked to write a sequel. In the end I wondered about combining their talents but I needed to see what people thought first. So far everyone has liked the idea! So I'm going with it. I have to admit to feeling really humbled that my characters have been taken to heart so much. I never expected that. But I'm going to have fun writing the stories, the scope is endless! Thanks for picking me up on that apostrophe! It has been removed!! :)) Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

    This is a copy and paste bit, just to let you all know what I'll do:

    I won't post the first chapter until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go. Hugs to you all! xx
reply by lyenochka on 11-Sep-2022
    Thank you for letting us know ahead of time! Hope you have a fabulous vacation! 💖💕
Comment from SLMorrical
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Well I can see why you are at the #1 spot for novelist. A trilogy is a wonderful idea. I'm just trying to do a sequel to the one I wrote a couple of years ago. This is wonderful, in fact I can't wait to read it. Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    aw, thank you. :)) I'm glad you enjoyed this bit of fun, it served me well, as everyone has said I should do it. Although I'll start writing it now, I won't post the first chapter until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go. I hope to see you there. Thanks you so much for the golden star, my friend, I very much appreciate it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
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What a clever idea! This could be very interesting. Of course, as you know, Mildred is my favorite. I'm eager to see what these two get up to. While I enjoyed this latest book with Bessie, nothing can top the trilogy of Mildred and Victoria.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    I know you loved the Mildred and Veronica stories, but I thought this might be a fun one too. Just a test. I'll see how the first one goes down. If it's a failure, I'll send Mildred back to Veronica. (Promise) :)) Thank you, my dear SATP. Love you lots. Sandra. xxx


    I won't post the first book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go. xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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What ever you decide to do will no doubt be a success, Sandra. Anything you decide on will be great. A trilogy could turn into a novel or novelette. You know more about these things than I do. LOL Just write on, Dear. You are very talented. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Aw, thank you my dear friend. So far I've had everyone wanting to see my two time-travellers together, I think they will be fun. I know I'll have fun writing them. Thanks, my lovely friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
    I won't post the first book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Ah, Sandra, I can't offer an educated suggestion. I've neglected your writing for too long. Clearly, these characters have strong followings--and I'm sure I know why. They're a hoot.
This reminds me of a couple of scripts I've written where my characters try to push me around.

Whatever you decide, Sandra, I'm sure it'll be the best decision.

Peace, Lee

Mildred stared at her chewed nails and sighed.--Mildred already said, "Look at my nails', so we can assume she was already looking at them herself. Perhaps the line is a little cleaner this way: Mildred chewed at her nails and sighed. Just a suggestion, Sandra.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much, Lee, that is so nice of you to read this. From the reviews I've had, everyone has said, go for it, so I will. I'm glad you got a feel for these two characters, they have taken over my life! I learned a lot from reading your stories, especially the dialects, and I have to admit, I've neglected you as well. I'll rectify that. Thanks so much for the golden star, that was so nice of you. And a big thank you for your suggestion, I would be a fool to ignore it. Thanks, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
    If you are thinking of reading my new story, I won't be starting it until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go. I hope to see you then. xxxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I really like the idea. I am sure the characters who will work with them will be wonderful. I do hope you can somehow turn it into a romance. LOL But I know I will love whatever it is. I say go for it.

Following Bessie, Midred sat down next to her. (Mildred sat beside her)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Of course I will! I like a bit of romance. Thank you, Barbara, for your input and the golden star! I have made the correction, thanks for that as well.

    I won't post the first book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go.
    Thanks again, my friend. Love and hugs Sandra xx
reply by barbara.wilkey on 11-Sep-2022
    Have fun and I will pray for traveling mercies.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Either a trilogy or a series would be great. I always love time-traveler stories and adventures. Go for it. You will write it beautifully, I'm sure. Thanks for sharing your ideas.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Theodore, that is such a nice thing to say. So far everyone has told to to 'go for it' so I will!
    I won't post the first book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go. Thank you again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Judy Lawless
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I'm not familiar with Mildred, Sandra. I'm assuming it's something you wrote and posted before I joined FS. But just reading this introduction, I think your new idea is brilliant. I'm sure it could be a whole series, but I'm sure I'll enjoy reading it either way.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    I wrote the first book with Mildred in, back in 2016, it was the start of a trilogy and although Mildred hadn't started out as a main character, I could see how much the readers liked her, so I gave her a stronger role. If you liked Bessie, you will like Mildred, and they will be perfect together. I'm thinking a series, too. Thank you, Judy, so far I haven't had one not like the idea.
    I won't start the book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll have the chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go.
    Thank you, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx
reply by Judy Lawless on 11-Sep-2022
    You're welcome, Sandra. I look forward to following it. The cruise sounds fantastic. I will probably be away for part of October/November to be with my daughter when her son is in hospital. I hope I will still find time to write and review. Hugs.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    I hope it's not serious? I would be doing the same as you if it was my grandchild who was going to be operated on. I wish him a speedy recovery.
    You can write and review when you have time, don't put pressure on yourself. Hugs back, my friend.
reply by Judy Lawless on 11-Sep-2022
    Thanks Sandra. It isn't a matter of surgery. He's been going through a lot of mental distress and acting out that my daughter had been trying to deal with for too long. He will be assessed in hospital, as soon as there is a spot for him. It's a distance from them so she will stay in the city, while her husband and daughter remain at home. She will definitely need her family members to take turns being there to support her, and him. Thanks for your concern.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    That is even harder, at least with surgery, you know it won't be long before they are recovered. Your daughter will definitely need your support. You take care, Judy, and as I said, don't pressure yourself. Love Sandra xx
reply by Judy Lawless on 11-Sep-2022
    That is all so true. We have all been affected by this, so we're praying this treatment will lead him to a better future. He's only fourteen.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    14! Bless him. There's too much going on in youngsters lives these days that we don't know about. I do hope this will help him. It's good that he has the support of his family. He'll know one day that you all cared, even if he doesn't at the moment. I'll add him to my prayers. xx
reply by Judy Lawless on 11-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much, Sandra. They can't have too many prayers. xx
Comment from country ranch writer
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9/11/22/--9:28am


I think miss Sandra has made up her Mind already to let them work our the details they have been pondering on by now.shh, hear she comes lets hear what she has to say to them!l

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Lol, I think you might be right! I'm quite looking forward to this new challenge. Thank you so much for this fun review and the golden star! I really appreciate them both. Warm hugs, Sandra xx

    I won't post the first book until I return from holiday. I'm going on a cruise around the Canary Islands, on the 8th October until the 22nd, but I'll get the first chapter ready to post for the 23rd October before I go.