The Return
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sandra, what a great ending to this wonderful saga. So she got her Miles after all!! I'm so pleased.
It's such a beautiful story, and as you know I have enjoyed reading it all way through. I will miss it and all the characters. Bessie, of course, had a special place.
Just to let you know. I haven't posted this week because my family from Denmark has been here most of the week. It was lovely to see my three small granddaughters after 2 years and 9 months. Zoe, the youngest one, didn't even recognised me. She was 10 months when I saw her last. Bless her. They are all leaving at midday tomorrow. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Oh, Sandra, what a great ending to this wonderful saga. So she got her Miles after all!! I'm so pleased.
It's such a beautiful story, and as you know I have enjoyed reading it all way through. I will miss it and all the characters. Bessie, of course, had a special place.
Just to let you know. I haven't posted this week because my family from Denmark has been here most of the week. It was lovely to see my three small granddaughters after 2 years and 9 months. Zoe, the youngest one, didn't even recognised me. She was 10 months when I saw her last. Bless her. They are all leaving at midday tomorrow. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, Ulla. You've been a brilliant support, and I've always appreciated you. Thank you so much for the golden star, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
I'm sure you had a ball with your family after all this time. Lockdown has hurt many people over that time. I'm glad you've had a lovely time. You'll have to make sure you see your grandchildren more often so they don't forget you. 😊😊 xxxx
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! A perfect ending - I wouldn't have expected anything less! And the punishments were just for the guilty parties without involving the law and all the societal shame.
A lot of revelations occurred over the book. The Brandons learned being obsessed with the past can lead to bad choices. Gwendolyn and Jenkins reveal their love and commitment for each other. Margot learned that one can go back to the same moment in time after time travel. Margot taught Meg that it is good to enjoy sexual pleasure. And Bessie learned from Margot that coffee is perfectly safe to drink and even like!
Enjoyed your book!!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hooray! A perfect ending - I wouldn't have expected anything less! And the punishments were just for the guilty parties without involving the law and all the societal shame.
A lot of revelations occurred over the book. The Brandons learned being obsessed with the past can lead to bad choices. Gwendolyn and Jenkins reveal their love and commitment for each other. Margot learned that one can go back to the same moment in time after time travel. Margot taught Meg that it is good to enjoy sexual pleasure. And Bessie learned from Margot that coffee is perfectly safe to drink and even like!
Enjoyed your book!!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Wow, can I get you to write my book synopsis, Helen? That was a brilliant review going back over the story! Thank you so very much! And another big thank you for the golden star! I've enjoyed all your reviews, and the help you've often offered, I've appreciated it all. Thank you! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Oh, what an honor. But I'm not good with titles or synopsis writing. That is for the pros. I'd be happy to write a review!!
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Yes please!! I'd love that. Thank you, Helen! You're such a fabulous friend! Truly, thank you. Love you lots! xxx
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Love you, too!! 💖💖
Comment from aryr
Very well done, Sandra. This was a great final chapter. Miles had found her/ Margot or rather Miles and Meg's great-grandson. Margot almost fudged it when she accidently called him Lord Brandon. The rest of the family either died or they were excused from their crimes. It was so nice that this had a very happy ending. I have no idea but I do know that about two years ago for a couple of months I had the same problem, then poof it corrected itself. Great job and I enjoyed it immensely. Blessings n hugs!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Very well done, Sandra. This was a great final chapter. Miles had found her/ Margot or rather Miles and Meg's great-grandson. Margot almost fudged it when she accidently called him Lord Brandon. The rest of the family either died or they were excused from their crimes. It was so nice that this had a very happy ending. I have no idea but I do know that about two years ago for a couple of months I had the same problem, then poof it corrected itself. Great job and I enjoyed it immensely. Blessings n hugs!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much for the golden star topping this fabulous review, Alie!! I'm over the moon that you've enjoyed my book.
I've had a couple of people give me solutions to correct the spacing, I'll try it later. Thanks again, my dear friend. Warm hugs. :)) Sandra xx
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You are so very welcome, Sandra. Warm hugs!
Comment from damommy
What a great ending! I hope Bessie doesn't disappear forever, and there will be more stories like this. Margot will learn to love this new Miles for himself, and not for the memories of the first Miles.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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What a great ending! I hope Bessie doesn't disappear forever, and there will be more stories like this. Margot will learn to love this new Miles for himself, and not for the memories of the first Miles.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Bessie will be back after Mildred and Veronica have solved their next assignment! 😊😊
Thank you so much, dear SATP, for this lovely review and all the stars! I've been blessed having you as my adopted sister. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the ending, I was almost biting my nails waiting for the first responses. Love you lots!! 🥰😊 Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, take a bow my amazing friend...
you pulled it off in flying colors you...
I'm clapping on this side of the waters...
now Margot will be as close to Miles as she
can get...how many women can say...I slept
with your great grandfather...and now I will
be with you...life is good...
I was a bit disappointed that all the bad guys got away...
but I guess better to forgive...then not...that's
the Christian way...and his mother passing was poetic justice...but if you really think about it...he father
was blessed...she really wasn't a nice person...
did you ever consider just taking her memory away?...
otherwise I was sorry to see Bessie was just gone...sigh...
it was an amazing story told...my beautiful friend...
did you go shopping today???...I know you said you were
going to take a break for awhile...I hope it was relaxing...
well done you...now on to the next story told...I got
your email...and will get back to you...might take a minute...but I will get there...
I'm so proud of you...sending you bundles of love and hugs...you are amazing...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi Sandra, take a bow my amazing friend...
you pulled it off in flying colors you...
I'm clapping on this side of the waters...
now Margot will be as close to Miles as she
can get...how many women can say...I slept
with your great grandfather...and now I will
be with you...life is good...
I was a bit disappointed that all the bad guys got away...
but I guess better to forgive...then not...that's
the Christian way...and his mother passing was poetic justice...but if you really think about it...he father
was blessed...she really wasn't a nice person...
did you ever consider just taking her memory away?...
otherwise I was sorry to see Bessie was just gone...sigh...
it was an amazing story told...my beautiful friend...
did you go shopping today???...I know you said you were
going to take a break for awhile...I hope it was relaxing...
well done you...now on to the next story told...I got
your email...and will get back to you...might take a minute...but I will get there...
I'm so proud of you...sending you bundles of love and hugs...you are amazing...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I don't think you've seen the last of Bessie, but she will have to wait until Mildred and Veronica have finished their next assignment. Then we'll see where Bessie takes us. I've realised most of my books are time travel, This Time That Time, all Eric's books we time travelling, this one, do you think people will get fed-up with them?
Oh well, perhaps more children's poems are needed!!
Thank you my sweet friend, for all the lovely reviews, they've been such fun, and most had me curled up laughing. Thank you! Love you lots dear friend, and sending you a humongous hug. :)) Sandra xx
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I told you when Mildred and Veronica
finish their last adventure...to continue
another one...but you were taking a break...
kind of...
and are people fed up with Star Wars...or Back To the Future...they still fill the theaters...
so no...people will not get fed up with your time travel stories...but I have to ask...have you ever looked into where you were really born???...maybe in your head from a different galaxy...and your looking for your true place of birth...🛸🛸...
you write what moves you at that moment...
YOUR FANS AWAIT YOU...and you beautiful girl...are so welcome...🌼💖😊🙏🤗💐🏆...
much love from all over the galaxy...xxoo
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You wait till you see what I'm posting on Sunday, you'll laugh your socks off. And, NO, it's not the start of my new novel. And, NO, I'm not telling you!!!! 😂🤣
Thank you, sweet friend, for what you said, you always give me that boost. Now you mention my place of birth, there could be something in that! LOL! Love you past infinity! xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm glad everything worked out for Meg and Miles, and for Margot. I did guess that Margot would meet Miles again in her own time. It was one of the few things I guessed right. LOL It's been a fun story.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I'm glad everything worked out for Meg and Miles, and for Margot. I did guess that Margot would meet Miles again in her own time. It was one of the few things I guessed right. LOL It's been a fun story.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Yes, you did get it right. Thank you, Cindy for all your reviews and lovely comments over the month. You've been great. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I think 95% of us end up spending our lives with someone who isn't really "The one." A substitute. Someone satisfactory or not, who is kind or rich or adequate, or a miserable creep who fills the void, and for a time, is better than being alone. LOL. But with pen in hand, we can write it the way we want it. And you've done it so well! It's been a great ride. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Well, I think 95% of us end up spending our lives with someone who isn't really "The one." A substitute. Someone satisfactory or not, who is kind or rich or adequate, or a miserable creep who fills the void, and for a time, is better than being alone. LOL. But with pen in hand, we can write it the way we want it. And you've done it so well! It's been a great ride. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Aw, thank you so much, Ric, for this really lovely review, and the wonderful golden sixth star. I am so glad you enjoyed the 'ride' as much as I enjoyed writing it. I've loved all your reviews, and have appreciated all your support. Sending load of love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Congratulations for finishing yet another book my sweet friend. I am so pleased to have been friends with a successful Author and Poet, Sandra. I'm happy Margot finally ended up with her very own version of Miles. She deserved it after all, he wouldn't have existed if it hadn't been for her. Well done and good luck with publishing and book sales ð???ð??? Nancy:)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Congratulations for finishing yet another book my sweet friend. I am so pleased to have been friends with a successful Author and Poet, Sandra. I'm happy Margot finally ended up with her very own version of Miles. She deserved it after all, he wouldn't have existed if it hadn't been for her. Well done and good luck with publishing and book sales ð???ð??? Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Aw, thank you, dear Nancy! I'm over the moon that you enjoyed this book. Thank you so much for always being so encouraging, and supportive. Your reviews have always been lovely. And thank you for this golden star! That was so kind of you!! Love you lots, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from lancellot
Well, that is what anyone would call a happy ending. And she lived happily every after. You did a good job tying everything up and making sure accountability was delivered or fate.
A very well written novel. Congrats.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Well, that is what anyone would call a happy ending. And she lived happily every after. You did a good job tying everything up and making sure accountability was delivered or fate.
A very well written novel. Congrats.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, Lance. You're reviews have always been wonderful, and I've really appreciated them all. The six stars are a bonus, and I'm always humbled and most grateful. I'm delighted that you've enjoyed my novel. Thank you, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a perfect ending. I was worried that Margot would be heartbroken, and it was bothering me. I couldn't figure out how you were going to make sure she lived happily ever after. You did it. GREAT JOB!!!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is a perfect ending. I was worried that Margot would be heartbroken, and it was bothering me. I couldn't figure out how you were going to make sure she lived happily ever after. You did it. GREAT JOB!!!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for your lovely comments. I had to have a happy ending for Margot, she deserved it. I'm so pleased you liked it. And, thank you for that golden sixth star, the icing on my cake!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx