The Return
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Comment from royowen
You really know how to stoke up interest in your next episode, at this point I can't put your book down, so I'll know who it is, heh heh. A wonderful twist in this and you're going to have to clear up the fact that Meg can see Margot and Bessie aren't you? Beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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You really know how to stoke up interest in your next episode, at this point I can't put your book down, so I'll know who it is, heh heh. A wonderful twist in this and you're going to have to clear up the fact that Meg can see Margot and Bessie aren't you? Beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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You'll find out next week who the cloaked lady is, Roy, and then we have to see what happens to Margot. I've had such a lot of fun writing this book and reading all the responses. Goodness knows where this one came from. I think I have a little man sitting on my shoulder, dictating it! LOL. Thanks so much, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
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I?m sure you have
Comment from DeboraDyess
I didn't find a single error and this was so engaging! Who is it!!!??? I'm guessing... except that I haven't read enough to even hazard a guess. lol
This is exceptionally written, Sandra. Well done!
Blessings,
Debs
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I didn't find a single error and this was so engaging! Who is it!!!??? I'm guessing... except that I haven't read enough to even hazard a guess. lol
This is exceptionally written, Sandra. Well done!
Blessings,
Debs
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Lol, next week, your question will be answered, lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, and I'm gobsmacked you found NO errors!! Thank you for the golden star, dear friend. I really appreciate it. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is an epic like, a huge book, in this chapter 34, this time, taletelling is about Margot and Bessie; Meg tried, but truth could be checked out, ultimately Meg pulled the woman's hood down; mystery remains; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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This is an epic like, a huge book, in this chapter 34, this time, taletelling is about Margot and Bessie; Meg tried, but truth could be checked out, ultimately Meg pulled the woman's hood down; mystery remains; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much for another lovely review, my friend, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter. You'll know the identity of our villain next week. Have a wonderful week! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Ulla
Ah, I loved it!!! You just left us on a tremendous cliff hanger, didn't you, Sandra? Wow, now what now? I can't wait. This was another lovely chapter. It's so well written, it really is. A big hug. Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Ah, I loved it!!! You just left us on a tremendous cliff hanger, didn't you, Sandra? Wow, now what now? I can't wait. This was another lovely chapter. It's so well written, it really is. A big hug. Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Aw, thank you, Ulla, I'm so glad you've enjoyed this story. The big reveal will be next. Then just a few loose ends to tie up. Thank you for the golden star, my friend, and lovely review, your support has been wonderful. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
Talk about a cliff hanger! How are we to get through the next seven days? That is aa dodgy way to try to kill someone. If you cut right through the grth stap she wouldn't be able to mount up sou the plan must have been to partially sever the strap so that it would break later. But anyway who is the mystery person known to Them who has tampered with it? I cant wait.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Talk about a cliff hanger! How are we to get through the next seven days? That is aa dodgy way to try to kill someone. If you cut right through the grth stap she wouldn't be able to mount up sou the plan must have been to partially sever the strap so that it would break later. But anyway who is the mystery person known to Them who has tampered with it? I cant wait.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I checked with Judy, and she said it was fine. But, I know what you mean, and then again, they do it on the westerns on television. I haven't a clue about them, and had to research some of it and then let Judy sort it out. She's great.
Nearly finished now. Thanks so much for the lovely review, and the golden star! Racing's back next week!! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Shirley McLain
You talk about leaving one hanging in mid air, you did it to me. I am dying to know who the woman was. You did a great job as always. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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You talk about leaving one hanging in mid air, you did it to me. I am dying to know who the woman was. You did a great job as always. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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LOL. Two chapters left to go. Thank you so very much, Shirley, for another lovely review. I'm getting picked on by everyone this week! And I'm sending you a humongous hug for the golden star. Love you lots. Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
Whew! They foiled that attempt. Now if only Meg doesn't die in the struggle. I wonder who the woman is? Is it Miles' mother? Can't wait to find out.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Whew! They foiled that attempt. Now if only Meg doesn't die in the struggle. I wonder who the woman is? Is it Miles' mother? Can't wait to find out.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I'm sorry dear sister, but I've not been told who this lady is yet!! Lol. You'll know straight away in the next chapter, and then it will be time for Margot to leave Miles. Tears a plenty!
Thank you so much for another lovely review, and for the sixth star, you're the best. I don't know what happened to this week, except one mess up with the hospital. Are you in on Tuesday? I'll be here and would love to chat. Love you lots, dearest SATP xxxxx
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Yes, I'll be here on Tuesday.
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I'll call you then. xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
YOU!!! How could you do this? You know what? I haven't the faintest idea who it could be! I am usually pretty clever when it comes to solving a mystery. I should say I was. That was then, this is now. LOL I will guess Lady Elizabeth Brandon, because she is the most unlikely because she is believed to be an invalid. Hidden by the cloak it is possible as long as no one else sees her. Well done! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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YOU!!! How could you do this? You know what? I haven't the faintest idea who it could be! I am usually pretty clever when it comes to solving a mystery. I should say I was. That was then, this is now. LOL I will guess Lady Elizabeth Brandon, because she is the most unlikely because she is believed to be an invalid. Hidden by the cloak it is possible as long as no one else sees her. Well done! Nancy:)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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LOL! I'm so sorry, I ran out of space to put the rest in!! Lol. You will discover who she is in the first sentence of the next chapter. I'll miss them. Thank you so much for another lovely review, for making me laugh and for supporting this book so much. And a big hug for the sixth gold star!! Love you lots, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Now, that's just not right to leave us guessing who this woman is. LOL I can't wait for your next post. I'm guess it's Mile's mother. But could be Gwendolyn, nope Mile's mother.
After watching Miles leave the next morning, Margot and Bessie waited a few minutes before walking around to the back of the house. (leave the following morning)
The next morning, Bessie and Margot climbed down from the hay bales at the far end of the stable (The following morning)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Now, that's just not right to leave us guessing who this woman is. LOL I can't wait for your next post. I'm guess it's Mile's mother. But could be Gwendolyn, nope Mile's mother.
After watching Miles leave the next morning, Margot and Bessie waited a few minutes before walking around to the back of the house. (leave the following morning)
The next morning, Bessie and Margot climbed down from the hay bales at the far end of the stable (The following morning)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, I've made the corrections. I should know that by now. Lol. Thank you for the golden star, and the lovely review. You will find out who it is next time. I'm writing it now. Thanks, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Well, well, now we are left having to guess who this woman is, but I don't think there are too many possibilities.
-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that shows a real connection among the three women, even though what they have to tell Meg is a bit unbelievable, she understands enough clues to realize they are telling the truth.
-It still has to be hard for Margot to separate herself from Miles and what they shared, but I think she also knows there isn't a choice in the matter.
-I like how down to earth Meg is in asking when she is going to die, and saying she doesn't want to die, and then all three break up in laughter, showing how comfortable they all are. Then later, she says this would be exciting if someone wasn't going to kill her!
-A very good ending, and now we wait to see who the hooded lady is!
-Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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-Well, well, now we are left having to guess who this woman is, but I don't think there are too many possibilities.
-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that shows a real connection among the three women, even though what they have to tell Meg is a bit unbelievable, she understands enough clues to realize they are telling the truth.
-It still has to be hard for Margot to separate herself from Miles and what they shared, but I think she also knows there isn't a choice in the matter.
-I like how down to earth Meg is in asking when she is going to die, and saying she doesn't want to die, and then all three break up in laughter, showing how comfortable they all are. Then later, she says this would be exciting if someone wasn't going to kill her!
-A very good ending, and now we wait to see who the hooded lady is!
-Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for a really lovely review. I had some fun writing this part. I'm almost finished the next chapter, and then the final chapter will be after that. You've been amazing, my friend. Thank you for the golden star, and all your thoughts on this one. Love you lots, Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. Love you lots, too, and I look forward to the closing chapters, and the book cover!!!