A New Sole
New soles-new job30 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a great use of these words. Yes. It will definitely start a new adventure in the business world, a salesman, a professor, a magician, an actor. The world is vast, and the adventure could be huge.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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What a great use of these words. Yes. It will definitely start a new adventure in the business world, a salesman, a professor, a magician, an actor. The world is vast, and the adventure could be huge.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Normally with this form I see stories being told. Yoou decide to keep it brief. Thank you. It's easy to read and yet difficult to review using one hundred fifty characters.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Normally with this form I see stories being told. Yoou decide to keep it brief. Thank you. It's easy to read and yet difficult to review using one hundred fifty characters.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Frank Malley
This poet very efficiently makes use of the six words required by the poetry contest he or she has entered. The author missed the opportunity to make this sequence of words flow by adding some words and adjusting his lining. A hopeful example:
Ooh, the magic of that shine
On my black shoes excited me
Hey adventure! You got to begin soon!
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This poet very efficiently makes use of the six words required by the poetry contest he or she has entered. The author missed the opportunity to make this sequence of words flow by adding some words and adjusting his lining. A hopeful example:
Ooh, the magic of that shine
On my black shoes excited me
Hey adventure! You got to begin soon!
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
hmm nice entry for this contest nailed in two short lines. I like the way ti flows from the beginning to the end and I like that if features the simple shine of shoes waiting for a new adventure.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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hmm nice entry for this contest nailed in two short lines. I like the way ti flows from the beginning to the end and I like that if features the simple shine of shoes waiting for a new adventure.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is one great short poem with all the words needed. This is impressive to me. The shoe reminds me of an ad for Florsheim shoes. My dad worked there in the late fifties in Chicago. Thank you for sharing. You did a great job.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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This is one great short poem with all the words needed. This is impressive to me. The shoe reminds me of an ad for Florsheim shoes. My dad worked there in the late fifties in Chicago. Thank you for sharing. You did a great job.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are extremely creative. I like how new shoes were used to lead up to an adventure! The title of this poem is awesome and
makes me stop and think! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is adventurous and compliments the theme and words of this poem!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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The author's words are extremely creative. I like how new shoes were used to lead up to an adventure! The title of this poem is awesome and
makes me stop and think! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is adventurous and compliments the theme and words of this poem!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I like your poem. it reminds me of shoe-shining stands. When people felt shoes made the man. Your text reminds me of those times. I would bold the text. I think it needs to be more prominent because the visual is on point and dominates. It fits perfectly.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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I like your poem. it reminds me of shoe-shining stands. When people felt shoes made the man. Your text reminds me of those times. I would bold the text. I think it needs to be more prominent because the visual is on point and dominates. It fits perfectly.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of artwork.
-You have used the required words well.
-You create a positive vibe with
with effective imagery in line one.
-A good second line showing the
promise that is to come.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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-Good choice of artwork.
-You have used the required words well.
-You create a positive vibe with
with effective imagery in line one.
-A good second line showing the
promise that is to come.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from pome lover
don't know if this is fiction or non. If non, then a new job is possible?
Shiny new shoes are fun and do seem to give the owner a feeling of something good to come. You used the words offered you to make a fun, upbeat poem and statement.
Katharine
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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don't know if this is fiction or non. If non, then a new job is possible?
Shiny new shoes are fun and do seem to give the owner a feeling of something good to come. You used the words offered you to make a fun, upbeat poem and statement.
Katharine
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Fleedleflump
Ah yes - new shoes, new outlook! Sometimes a small refresh of the wardrobe can have a positive effect on us mentally. I very much enjoyed your poem.
Mike
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Ah yes - new shoes, new outlook! Sometimes a small refresh of the wardrobe can have a positive effect on us mentally. I very much enjoyed your poem.
Mike
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
