Potato Chips
Acrostic32 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-I agree about the chips but in moderation
I think it is okay:)
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show the impact of eating
too many chips in verse one.
-I like the opening of the second
verse with the choices and "Holy cow!"
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-I agree about the chips but in moderation
I think it is okay:)
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show the impact of eating
too many chips in verse one.
-I like the opening of the second
verse with the choices and "Holy cow!"
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this review.
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You are welcome!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well, it was humorous and relatable Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well, it was humorous and relatable Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you much.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is an outstanding poem for this contest, good luck. My wife use to say something similar about enchiladas, "I don't need to eat one, I should just place it on my hip, and get another one and put it on the other hip." Good Work! Terry.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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This is an outstanding poem for this contest, good luck. My wife use to say something similar about enchiladas, "I don't need to eat one, I should just place it on my hip, and get another one and put it on the other hip." Good Work! Terry.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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So funny! Thank you for this review.
Comment from GTG345
A great poem that involves self- improvement on resisting potato chips.
Great exaggeration with using the explanation marks and using the "H" as "Holy cow", Makes it more funny. Good luck in the contest! -GTG345
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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A great poem that involves self- improvement on resisting potato chips.
Great exaggeration with using the explanation marks and using the "H" as "Holy cow", Makes it more funny. Good luck in the contest! -GTG345
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you. Glad you liked it!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Those potato chips are not all equal. Some of them, like kettle or sour cream ones, I can not eat. A great chip is one that does not have all those brown or black spots. I enjoy eating them with onion dip. Usually homemade dip. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Those potato chips are not all equal. Some of them, like kettle or sour cream ones, I can not eat. A great chip is one that does not have all those brown or black spots. I enjoy eating them with onion dip. Usually homemade dip. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute, and nice rhyming too.
I especially liked:
Involve less chips,
Perhaps less hips
(After giving up those chips, you better learn how to swing those hips.)
A fun poem. Well done. Perfect artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
p.s. It's almost 1 a.m., and you have me wanting Chips. Lol.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Hello author, very good, very cute, and nice rhyming too.
I especially liked:
Involve less chips,
Perhaps less hips
(After giving up those chips, you better learn how to swing those hips.)
A fun poem. Well done. Perfect artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
p.s. It's almost 1 a.m., and you have me wanting Chips. Lol.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from Marienkiefer
I loved this lighthearted snack on chips. Delightful poem, warm and fresh sense of humour.
-Unapologetic and unassuming about snacking habits.
-I had almost an entire bag of chips, last night. My confession to fellow chip fans. Thanks for choosing a down to earth topic, and for subtle, stylish intimations.
Good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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I loved this lighthearted snack on chips. Delightful poem, warm and fresh sense of humour.
-Unapologetic and unassuming about snacking habits.
-I had almost an entire bag of chips, last night. My confession to fellow chip fans. Thanks for choosing a down to earth topic, and for subtle, stylish intimations.
Good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Carlos' girl
YES. See the Lays. See them disappear. Omg what a poem. I love it. Love LoVe LOVE it
So hard to maintain our figure when Lays is in the house.
Please enjoy some for me..im on a diet
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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YES. See the Lays. See them disappear. Omg what a poem. I love it. Love LoVe LOVE it
So hard to maintain our figure when Lays is in the house.
Please enjoy some for me..im on a diet
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review!
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Welcome
Comment from LisaMay
haha... I can relate to this. You have written of a common problem for chip-lovers such as you and me in an entertaining way while fulfilling the contest prompt. Good luck for the contest as well as for your diet!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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haha... I can relate to this. You have written of a common problem for chip-lovers such as you and me in an entertaining way while fulfilling the contest prompt. Good luck for the contest as well as for your diet!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are humorous, clear, descriptive, and creative. I liked
the chips also and the poem made me smile! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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The author's words are humorous, clear, descriptive, and creative. I liked
the chips also and the poem made me smile! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
