Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "~Tangled up in Blue~"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! And again, I think this should have been in the site contest!
I really liked "a vase of dreams " and
"your pounding heart
is a lighthouse
that guides me out of the dark "
Great metaphors to express the feelings of love.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Loved this! And again, I think this should have been in the site contest!
I really liked "a vase of dreams " and
"your pounding heart
is a lighthouse
that guides me out of the dark "
Great metaphors to express the feelings of love.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen, for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem- it paints an interesting picture- and has a nice poetic flow to it- I like the light house guiding you out of the darkness- nice touch- good job
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I like this poem- it paints an interesting picture- and has a nice poetic flow to it- I like the light house guiding you out of the darkness- nice touch- good job
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A small nod to Bob Dylan if only for the phrase.
Whatever else one thinks about his songs they are full of memorable phrases. The poem flows well and fits well in the music term of blues. The words are fitting to the sentiment. The answer is both a answer to the statement and to the feeling of blues. An intoxicating mixture of cultures.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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A small nod to Bob Dylan if only for the phrase.
Whatever else one thinks about his songs they are full of memorable phrases. The poem flows well and fits well in the music term of blues. The words are fitting to the sentiment. The answer is both a answer to the statement and to the feeling of blues. An intoxicating mixture of cultures.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Tangled up in blue is one of my favorites Bob Dylan songs. I just love the imagery it evokes.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and my ex's lighthouse must have been for the entrance to the Island of Sirens because I was broken on the rocks of oblivion!
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and my ex's lighthouse must have been for the entrance to the Island of Sirens because I was broken on the rocks of oblivion!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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LoL mine too.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed the romantic imagery you have utilised to convey love and longing and ultimate reunion and togetherness. The title of Dylan's song fits in nicely.
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I enjoyed the romantic imagery you have utilised to convey love and longing and ultimate reunion and togetherness. The title of Dylan's song fits in nicely.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post my friend, the tanka when used well, and you use all these Japanese forms extremely well indeed Gypsy, a wonderful post indeed, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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A beautifully written post my friend, the tanka when used well, and you use all these Japanese forms extremely well indeed Gypsy, a wonderful post indeed, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from Christine Geyer
I really enjoyed this poem. I had to read it through again to make sure that I understood the need for the first part. It gave me a feeling of melancholy towards the writer which is a sign that you have captured your audience. Nice job
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I really enjoyed this poem. I had to read it through again to make sure that I understood the need for the first part. It gave me a feeling of melancholy towards the writer which is a sign that you have captured your audience. Nice job
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis