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haiku (fireflies swirl above)

A Haiku Contest Entry

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Comment from karenina
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New word for me!

Merriam Webster helped me out:

"Definition of grama: any of several pasture grasses (genus Bouteloua) of the western U.S."

(Great! I'll be looking for this is a crossword!)

Love this haiku. Fireflies/ sparks from a campfire -- it all comes full circle and in an elegant fashion.

Great image to accompany!

Karenina



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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
    Thanks Karenina?us Texas boys know our hay!
reply by karenina on 12-Jun-2022
    I promise to inject this word into my conversation at LEAST three times today! Just for fun!

    :)
Comment from Susan Newell
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Chris,

You taught me a new word. I was able to decipher "grama" from context, but looked it up to find the details. What an interesting observation to see fireflies as sparks from a campfire. I liked the soft swirl/sweeping, punctuated with the harsher sparks. Very nice.

Sue

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
    Sue,
    You are too kind! Thanks for the generous review. Yes?us Texas boys know our hay!
reply by Susan Newell on 12-Jun-2022
    Always welcome!