Baby in Blue
Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.67 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I have three grandchildren...they are precious to me. I can't wait to have great grandchildren one day. Excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest..
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
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I have three grandchildren...they are precious to me. I can't wait to have great grandchildren one day. Excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest..
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Raul1
It is interesting and entertaining to read. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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It is interesting and entertaining to read. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
A lovely short poem about anticipating grand-parenthood, though the words seem to indicate to me that the baby has just arrived (rather than being still anticipated.) I like the use of alliteration. Thanks for sharing.
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A lovely short poem about anticipating grand-parenthood, though the words seem to indicate to me that the baby has just arrived (rather than being still anticipated.) I like the use of alliteration. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Beck Fenton
Ah, babies that are welcomed by a family are treasures, for sure. You have done a good job conveying the emotional suspense as you await this birth. Nice job!
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Ah, babies that are welcomed by a family are treasures, for sure. You have done a good job conveying the emotional suspense as you await this birth. Nice job!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from JoannaN
This poem is cute, there is so much emotions in only a few letters. Such a poem can be a wonderful souvenir for you and your grandson :) Best regards
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This poem is cute, there is so much emotions in only a few letters. Such a poem can be a wonderful souvenir for you and your grandson :) Best regards
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Linda,
First congratulations on the anticipated arrival of your new great-grandson.
That first cry is like music to the heart.
This an excellent six word poem for the contest with a wonderful theme.
Perfect picture to match.
Hope you are doing well.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
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Hello Linda,
First congratulations on the anticipated arrival of your new great-grandson.
That first cry is like music to the heart.
This an excellent six word poem for the contest with a wonderful theme.
Perfect picture to match.
Hope you are doing well.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is so sweet, right down to Pooh Bear waiting at his side.
This is a nice entry for this contest - hopeful and happy, and your word choices are perfect!
Good luck with this future bundle of joy and the contest.
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This is so sweet, right down to Pooh Bear waiting at his side.
This is a nice entry for this contest - hopeful and happy, and your word choices are perfect!
Good luck with this future bundle of joy and the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from evilynne
Congrats on your awaited arrival. Your feelings are we;; expressed in your little poems. Be patient, September will be here before you know it! Evi
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Congrats on your awaited arrival. Your feelings are we;; expressed in your little poems. Be patient, September will be here before you know it! Evi
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Congratulations. If the p[icture is of the lad you are fortunate. He looks to be content, healthy and soon enough able to run circles around great-grandmama.
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Congratulations. If the p[icture is of the lad you are fortunate. He looks to be content, healthy and soon enough able to run circles around great-grandmama.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Frank Malley
Wow! A great grandson! May he thrive and know the benefits of your love and wisdom. Your poem, "Baby in Blue," captures the excited fulfillment of this birth. Not easy to do in six words, but you've succeeded. New life is always a thrill.
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Wow! A great grandson! May he thrive and know the benefits of your love and wisdom. Your poem, "Baby in Blue," captures the excited fulfillment of this birth. Not easy to do in six words, but you've succeeded. New life is always a thrill.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
