You Got to Know When to Fold'em
Shouldn't have played the extra ace21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that "fifth ace" would be a dead giveaway that he's playing with more than one deck of cards. Man, they must take their card games so seriously if it ends in death! Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Yes, that "fifth ace" would be a dead giveaway that he's playing with more than one deck of cards. Man, they must take their card games so seriously if it ends in death! Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
