Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

Do... whacky do... Whacky doo...
Grin. Reminds me of the filler in songs from the 60's, particularly Roger Mitchell. I like the rhyming and the "gnarly" turn of phrases. Fun poem!

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

"Trailers for sale or rent....."......Thanks so much ....you are right....these are fun little fillers......Sprites or lites......Godspeed to you and yours

Stu Harrell

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very good poem for children who would love to jiggle and wiggle and wriggle as they think about the Wacky Doodle. You must have had fun writing it too! Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

Thanks so much.....I grew up with silly verses and these are fun to stitch together......Best to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)

Excellent

Hi Stu! Cute poem! It would entertain a child, for sure, but it doesn't talk down to them. I like that it's also complex enough for me to have fun with it, too. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

Thanks so much......I like stuff that is a little noisy.....Best to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A sweet children's story in a sing along jiggly wiggles silly verse. Children will love it.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks so much.....we need a little silliness these days...
Best Wishes to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think this is a great entry in this childen's poetry contest my friend, a excellent post, that trends and makes fine imagery. I love a tale ina a story, so this is a good chance in this contest, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Yo Brother.....thanks so much....always love your stuff....Godspeed to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

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reply by royowen on 20-May-2022

Bless you Stuart

Comment from R.B.Bunn

Excellent

This was a really cute poem. I loved the alliteration, really helped give the poem a whimsical feel appropriate for what you were aiming to accomplish. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks very much......I figured we need a little silly every now and then....

Best to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are engaging, silly, funny, descriptive and
creative. I thought about how sometimes a silly poem is so good
for us! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words
made me smile! Have a great weekend!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks so very much....these are fun just to wiggle giggle together...so many are so somber...Yikes....every now and then ...we need a little silliness....Best Wishes to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello Stuart a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your children's poem, nice flow, nice rhymes, and fun message for the kids. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks so very much....the message to kids is just wander around and make something up...
Best to you and yours......Stu Harrell

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun write for kids and your inventive language made your words sing along as children love listening to the music within words. An inventive and pleasureable write Stuart, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks so very much.....you are still my hero.....not quite as elegant as you ,but I am trying....for now I'll write them "splashy dashy"...
Best Wishes to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

A really good silly poem. It might be a little too much for the really young child, but the older ones would get a kick out of this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks so much.....I grew up with "silly little verses" and like to bash them together....however rough and tumble....these are done to help kids..."just make stuff up"......

Best to you and yours.....Stu Harrell