Tucker at Poker Night (Part-3)
Big-time poker night at the Trocadero33 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
A significant part 3, my friend Ric, things are picking up, and I'm excited to see part 4. I love your quirky style; it's engaging and character-building. Thank you for the read, my friend. Best JohnC
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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A significant part 3, my friend Ric, things are picking up, and I'm excited to see part 4. I love your quirky style; it's engaging and character-building. Thank you for the read, my friend. Best JohnC
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thanks, John, for tuning in to part 3, your generous review, and kind comments. I'm a goof who entertains myself with my foolish farces. Old, broke down, and unable to keep up the pace of the past, I live through my pen, and iced tea, and my La-Z-Boy. Much appreciate, my friend! Ric
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You can keep the iced tea, but I'll take the pen and the La-Z-Boy.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Ric Myworld
Here I am finished reading part 3 of Tucker at Poker Night (Part-3)
Let me say you have an ingenious way of keeping me wanting to read about a Texas Hold'em buy-in is $5,000, with a $5,000 one-time re-buy. Not a poor boy's game. Twenty-seven tables, nine-seats per, and if every player re-buys, the total payout equals $2,430,000."
I like how describe the characters your colorful way you described Tammy. Now do I need to read your previous chapters?
Gert
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Ric Myworld
Here I am finished reading part 3 of Tucker at Poker Night (Part-3)
Let me say you have an ingenious way of keeping me wanting to read about a Texas Hold'em buy-in is $5,000, with a $5,000 one-time re-buy. Not a poor boy's game. Twenty-seven tables, nine-seats per, and if every player re-buys, the total payout equals $2,430,000."
I like how describe the characters your colorful way you described Tammy. Now do I need to read your previous chapters?
Gert
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gert Sherwood, for your generous review and kind words. I haven't seen you around for a while, but it's always nice to see your name pop up. I don't want to blow my own horn, but I like to think that each part is important in creating the characters and getting the jest of the whole story. So, yes, I think you will find each part entertaining and helpful to where the next parts of the story are going, which I don't even know yet. LOL. I always appreciate getting your reviews!
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
Boy would that be alarming being told to skidaddle from a place wouldn't be easy to take, but I've never been in places like that, but I can imagine. An excellent post Ric, this covered the gamut of descriptive imagery and awakened the imagination of the divish level of activities going on. An excellent post my friend, blessings Roy
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Boy would that be alarming being told to skidaddle from a place wouldn't be easy to take, but I've never been in places like that, but I can imagine. An excellent post Ric, this covered the gamut of descriptive imagery and awakened the imagination of the divish level of activities going on. An excellent post my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Roy, for your generous review and kind words. It's always a pleasure when talented wordsmiths like you tune in to my silly farces and have sometime nice to say. Much appreciated!
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You?re pretty talented yourself Ric
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Thank you so much, Sir. It means a lot coming from you. Blessings, my friend!
Comment from LJbutterfly
You held me captive, mesmerized by every word. I couldn't read fast enough. Your descriptions are phenomenally clear and often humorous. You put me in the club. I could see the players and hear the crowd, like watching a movie. Then you left me hanging onto a thread at the end, about to fall off. I hope I can hang on until you post Part 4. I'm loving this story.
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You held me captive, mesmerized by every word. I couldn't read fast enough. Your descriptions are phenomenally clear and often humorous. You put me in the club. I could see the players and hear the crowd, like watching a movie. Then you left me hanging onto a thread at the end, about to fall off. I hope I can hang on until you post Part 4. I'm loving this story.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Lorraine, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. I'm glad I could put you in the action and make you feel like you were there. Of course, I hate having to pare down these parts and kill the momentum to keep the parts short enough. LOL. It's always a pleasure when those I read and enjoy regularly can be entertained by my foolishness. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Like the descriptions like "door ornaments" for ticket takers.
Seems a lot of action occurs at this joint.
Really like the first paragraph, just tells readers a lot is yet to come so do not run off until you read this.
So well written.
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Like the descriptions like "door ornaments" for ticket takers.
Seems a lot of action occurs at this joint.
Really like the first paragraph, just tells readers a lot is yet to come so do not run off until you read this.
So well written.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Brett Matthew, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. There is nothing more encouraging than for the talented writers I read and enjoy regularly to take time to read my work and have nice things to say. Much appreciated, my friend!
Comment from jenintorre
Wow Ric. You did it again. How do you do it? I just love your. descriptionsof the characters. That Trocadero is some place. Can't wait fof the next episode. Have a nice evening. Love. Jen.
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Wow Ric. You did it again. How do you do it? I just love your. descriptionsof the characters. That Trocadero is some place. Can't wait fof the next episode. Have a nice evening. Love. Jen.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Jen, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. I'm just a goofy old boy who writes foolishness to keep himself entertained since slowing to a crawl in his own life. Damnit!. LOL. I appreciate YOU. XO Ric
Comment from Susan Newell
Ric,
I love your style. There are so many great phrases that I can't begin to pick the best. It's enough to say that I could easily envision every scene and character. Can't wait to find out what is going down next!
Sue
besides his bulging muscles and massive physic ==> physique (one definition of physic is a medical preparation, often a purgative :-D)
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Ric,
I love your style. There are so many great phrases that I can't begin to pick the best. It's enough to say that I could easily envision every scene and character. Can't wait to find out what is going down next!
Sue
besides his bulging muscles and massive physic ==> physique (one definition of physic is a medical preparation, often a purgative :-D)
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Susan, for your generous review, kind words, and suggestions that always help me to knock a little of the dumb off my stories. I don't even think that physic is a word, is it? Well, at least I keep you sharp, since you never know what kind of silly blunder I might come up with next. LOL. Much appreciated!
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Always welcome, Ric. Yes, physic is a word. The times I've heard it used was as a cure for constipation. :-) Look it up.
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ROFL! Cure for constipation . . . huh, at least I'm good for something.
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Your writing shows that you are good for the literary world as well. You have captured the genre and made it your own.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love your fast moving story. There is no lagging, and I didn't see any mistakes. You do a great job, even if you don't edit. Have a wonderful Saturday. Shirley
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I love your fast moving story. There is no lagging, and I didn't see any mistakes. You do a great job, even if you don't edit. Have a wonderful Saturday. Shirley
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Shirley, for joining in to read another of my silly out-of-control farces. I'm just a goofy old boy who writes foolishness to keep myself entertained, since I've gotten too old to live it. Much appreciated!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It sounds as though he thinks the place is going to blow up. Nothing would surprise me in a place like that. Wow. You do a good job of show don't tell, Ric. Well done. Nancy:)
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It sounds as though he thinks the place is going to blow up. Nothing would surprise me in a place like that. Wow. You do a good job of show don't tell, Ric. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for your generous review and kind words. I just like action, the more the better in my mind. I'm just a clown that has to keep something silly going on all the time. LOL. It's always nice to receive well done remarks from the talented writers who I read regularly. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from BethShelby
You pack your stories with some very interesting characters and a lot of action. It is sounds like a dangerous place to be and only for those with mega-bucks Something big is about to happen and Tucker wants Tammy Jo out of the danger zone.
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You pack your stories with some very interesting characters and a lot of action. It is sounds like a dangerous place to be and only for those with mega-bucks Something big is about to happen and Tucker wants Tammy Jo out of the danger zone.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Beth, for your extra-special six-star review on another of my foolish and out-of-control farces. This is just how a silly old boy keeps himself entertained when he isn't reading his Fanstory friends. LOL. I appreciate YOU!