The Appeal of Tangier
Thinking of a past vacation while fighting traffic.22 total reviews
Comment from Eliz T.
I found this a very well described scene. Feels like a memory even as I read it, even though I've never been to anything similar. Such a vivid scene painted well. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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I found this a very well described scene. Feels like a memory even as I read it, even though I've never been to anything similar. Such a vivid scene painted well. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed the image of hipsters being 'pulled along by their leashed rescue dogs'... next minute we are in Tangier.
I've been to Morocco so your words put me instantly back amidst 'the noise of negotiation', the pulsing throb of the souk and all those wonderful smells.
You've interwoven the required words to bring the reader an exotic scene and a glimpse of one of the beat generation's destinations.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I enjoyed the image of hipsters being 'pulled along by their leashed rescue dogs'... next minute we are in Tangier.
I've been to Morocco so your words put me instantly back amidst 'the noise of negotiation', the pulsing throb of the souk and all those wonderful smells.
You've interwoven the required words to bring the reader an exotic scene and a glimpse of one of the beat generation's destinations.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
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I love travelling vicariously.
