One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Goosey Gander
I love your poem, but most of all, I love the last stanza: "Most of all, I'll be in my children's hearts 'till the end of time." I love those lines. Thank you for sharing!
-GG
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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I love your poem, but most of all, I love the last stanza: "Most of all, I'll be in my children's hearts 'till the end of time." I love those lines. Thank you for sharing!
-GG
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
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Comment from RodG
The Speaker imagines his own ashes being whirled by the wind onto the sea and beaches. He imagines his presence will be known by his children in all seasons. I wish I were half as optimistic about my remains.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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The Speaker imagines his own ashes being whirled by the wind onto the sea and beaches. He imagines his presence will be known by his children in all seasons. I wish I were half as optimistic about my remains.
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Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a lovely poem with beautiful images.
-The nature imagery is outstanding and adds
a sense of peace to the poem.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-Thanks for sharing this and all you do
to share your knowledge and talent about haiku.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a lovely poem with beautiful images.
-The nature imagery is outstanding and adds
a sense of peace to the poem.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-Thanks for sharing this and all you do
to share your knowledge and talent about haiku.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars. I appreciate your feedback.
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Gypsy. I don't think I could have written about this because I don't like thinking about it:)
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, the narrative is poignant and compelling, it's sort of like something to be read by the ones who survive the death of the writer, so beautifully written my friend and classy work, well done, blessings Roy
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Beautifully written Gypsy, the narrative is poignant and compelling, it's sort of like something to be read by the ones who survive the death of the writer, so beautifully written my friend and classy work, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome