Comment from JoannaN

Excellent

A good structure. I like the fact how the poem interchanges from "them" to "him", showing and contrasting different points of view, different approaches to the life

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Thank you for your kind and thought-provoking review. John

Comment from jessizero

Exceptional

This was a wonderful telling of the tale of the three (four) in the fire. Your words are strong, and your rhymes are good. Thank you so much for sharing this here.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Thank you for your complimentary review and especially your more than generous sixth star. I really appreciate it. John

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

I love those appearances of Christ in the Old Testament (Daniel 10 and the end of Joshua 5 are my two favourites). Well done for encouraging faith through your poem.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Thank you for your kind and insightful review. John