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Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a lovely story, Carol. I was totally into it. A great example of the second time around. It's a great relationship when the couple can be best friends as well. Good Job. Didn't see any errors. Nancy:)
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This is a lovely story, Carol. I was totally into it. A great example of the second time around. It's a great relationship when the couple can be best friends as well. Good Job. Didn't see any errors. Nancy:)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wonderful memories go a long ways toward filling the voids of less exciting or memorable days. So, although it's morning, it's bound to be 5 o'clock somewhere, and I think I'll just mix a drink and try to nod off to more adventurous times. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Well, I won't change my old review, but since you've posted it again, I'll review it again. LOL.
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Wonderful memories go a long ways toward filling the voids of less exciting or memorable days. So, although it's morning, it's bound to be 5 o'clock somewhere, and I think I'll just mix a drink and try to nod off to more adventurous times. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Well, I won't change my old review, but since you've posted it again, I'll review it again. LOL.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, Carol, that was a lovely story about how you and your forever soulmate met. I'm sorry you lost him too soon. But the memories will be with you forever. The best marriages are those that began as friends. Marriages that are formed on that first burst of passion have nothing left when that fizzles out. Friendship lasts. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Aw, Carol, that was a lovely story about how you and your forever soulmate met. I'm sorry you lost him too soon. But the memories will be with you forever. The best marriages are those that began as friends. Marriages that are formed on that first burst of passion have nothing left when that fizzles out. Friendship lasts. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, Sandra. We had 42 years of friendship, support, and difficult times to build a lasting relationship. Those moments seemed far more important than the piece of paper but in the end I am glad we married, even if he was too ill to really enjoy life. We were blessed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Leann DS
You have described The start of A romantic relationship that many of us dream of. No big deal, a passionate kiss outside the bathroom... Both drinking alcohol... A bunch of people very close by... But, yes! That sounded amazing! I felt like one of the party guests standing in the shadows, watching secretly. Lol
Great story! Hugs to you!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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You have described The start of A romantic relationship that many of us dream of. No big deal, a passionate kiss outside the bathroom... Both drinking alcohol... A bunch of people very close by... But, yes! That sounded amazing! I felt like one of the party guests standing in the shadows, watching secretly. Lol
Great story! Hugs to you!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I wish you could see the picture, LeAnn. It is our wedding day in our back yard because Mike couldn't walk very well by that time, but it is obvious we are both very happy. Funny how some of us take life so nonchalantly when we are young and seem unaware of the trials our futures might bring. I was blessed to have many good years and I will love him forever. The memories live in my heart.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
I do like this story better, Carol. You have such a beautiful love story. This bit about the beginning is special. The picture is beautiful too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I do like this story better, Carol. You have such a beautiful love story. This bit about the beginning is special. The picture is beautiful too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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The picture is our wedding day in the back yard. We were both very happy. Even though Mike was very ill by then and his legs would barely hold him, he was determined to stand on his own. It was a short ceremony with family and we were both blessed.
Smiles, Carol
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What a sweet man. I'm glad you have such good memories to help you through the bad.
Comment from Wendy G
Oh Carol, this is a beautiful story, and I am glad you shared it. It must have given you happy memories to write it, although doubtless tinged with sad thoughts that he is no longer here to share life with you. I hope it does well in the non-fiction contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Oh Carol, this is a beautiful story, and I am glad you shared it. It must have given you happy memories to write it, although doubtless tinged with sad thoughts that he is no longer here to share life with you. I hope it does well in the non-fiction contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks, WEndy
The picture is our wedding day in the back yard. We were both very happy. Even though Mike was very ill by then and his legs would barely hold him, he was determined to stand on his own. It was a short ceremony with family and we were both blessed. The memories live in my heart forever.
Smiles, Carol
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I didn?t realise he was already so I?ll when you married him. That?s so sad. How long did you have together? You do both look very happy!!
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We were 18 years as friends and 22 years as a couple. He got sick in 2008 but still could get around until about 2013 and then he started going down hill. I closed my business and took care of him and my parents full time. We were only married officially two years because he wanted me to get his benefits when he passed. I loved him and it didn't matter one way or the other. We were always together even when we were friends because he lived next door, worked for me, and his wife was a major alcoholic. I think God wanted us to meet so I could take care of him, because even his girls said they never would have done what I did.
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It?s a beautiful love story! As you say- forever.
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Thank you, Wendy. There are not words to say how much I miss him.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Aww, this is so sweet. I loved it and more so because it is true. As usual, your writing is beautiful and touching. I'm so glad to see you going strong again. I was a bit worried when I wasn't seeing any of your writing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Aww, this is so sweet. I loved it and more so because it is true. As usual, your writing is beautiful and touching. I'm so glad to see you going strong again. I was a bit worried when I wasn't seeing any of your writing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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So was I but today seems a bit better so maybe my dark clouds are passing. I can hope anyways. Thanks for the review and your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a love story. That could have been made for TV. You did a great job explaining how he told you he loved you, I didn't see any errors. Have a great night. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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What a love story. That could have been made for TV. You did a great job explaining how he told you he loved you, I didn't see any errors. Have a great night. Shirley
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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We had 42 years as friends. supporters and husband and wife. I was blessed and I miss him very much. Thanks for the review, Shirley and your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sometimes in life, you find the love of your life. Evidently you found yours and decided to write your story. Did your friend pass away or move to another town, no wonder you miss him.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Sometimes in life, you find the love of your life. Evidently you found yours and decided to write your story. Did your friend pass away or move to another town, no wonder you miss him.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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We were together for 42 years and he passed away. I miss him with every breath I take. Thank you so much for the kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cass Carlton
Alas for a once upon a time love that lingers on in memories. The recollections of a widowed lady, of the night her lover declared himself, are tender and romantic. She was a sensible, down-to-earth type while he was a dashing, attractive man who made all his girlfriends' dreams come true. The one he truly loved was the sensible down-to-earth girl who had been at his side throughout his divorce and hers. At first she didn't believe him, until he kissed her again.
Lovely romantic stuff. Well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Alas for a once upon a time love that lingers on in memories. The recollections of a widowed lady, of the night her lover declared himself, are tender and romantic. She was a sensible, down-to-earth type while he was a dashing, attractive man who made all his girlfriends' dreams come true. The one he truly loved was the sensible down-to-earth girl who had been at his side throughout his divorce and hers. At first she didn't believe him, until he kissed her again.
Lovely romantic stuff. Well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Cass...
We were friends for a very very long time and were fortunate to share our later years together as man and wife. He became terminally ill and I never left his side. Our memories will live within my heart forever.
Smiles, Carol