Comment from
prettybluebirds
This is a lovely poem and well-written. The artwork you attached is perfect for the subject of the writing. I enjoyed reading this and will look forward to more of your writings. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
Thank you very much! Very encouraging and kind words, and I thank you also for the good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from
Verna Cole Mitchell
Excellent haiku, with air and scented leaves make wonderful seasoning, and I love the sky described as a bowl. This is the kind of poem that lingers in the mind.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
Thank you Verna! What a lovely review - I do appreciate your kind words.
Wendy