A God's Will
12 Word One Sentence Spiritual Fiction Contest God's Will53 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 12Word-1-Sentence Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. My goodness that's a lot of rules but did well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 12Word-1-Sentence Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. My goodness that's a lot of rules but did well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from pome lover
well, I don't know how you know that, but it would be a good thing. It looks, however, like old Putin will still be going at war games tomorrow.
He is an evil monster and I believe he will be charged with war crimes against civilians, if his own people don't get him first.
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well, I don't know how you know that, but it would be a good thing. It looks, however, like old Putin will still be going at war games tomorrow.
He is an evil monster and I believe he will be charged with war crimes against civilians, if his own people don't get him first.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well for the most part. I like its formatting. If your words were true, then all those engaged in war would be sent there.
Thanks for sharing and sponsoring contests.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry reads well for the most part. I like its formatting. If your words were true, then all those engaged in war would be sent there.
Thanks for sharing and sponsoring contests.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from LisaMay
As this is a fiction story it seems that God will NOT be sending all war engaged men to Hell. Just as well, because many of them are fighting for the freedom of their country against the Russians, and the Russian soldiers are probably fighting with no real motivation. It is Putin and his political yes-men who should be dispatched to Hell right now! Tomorrow isn't soon enough.
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As this is a fiction story it seems that God will NOT be sending all war engaged men to Hell. Just as well, because many of them are fighting for the freedom of their country against the Russians, and the Russian soldiers are probably fighting with no real motivation. It is Putin and his political yes-men who should be dispatched to Hell right now! Tomorrow isn't soon enough.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from RGstar
It seems men, and so many, even those bound by orders will have no rest. I am not sure where they will go , but a god many will end up dead, as well, other innocents. It seems man never learns. Even in this day and age.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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It seems men, and so many, even those bound by orders will have no rest. I am not sure where they will go , but a god many will end up dead, as well, other innocents. It seems man never learns. Even in this day and age.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from tfawcus
God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow. An interesting prayer. I'd be more inclined to send the men to Hell who had initiated the war. Those engaged in it often have little choice.
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God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow. An interesting prayer. I'd be more inclined to send the men to Hell who had initiated the war. Those engaged in it often have little choice.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I looked and this and found it a difficult piece to attempt. You have mastered it with the restrictions given. Excellent composition and form. Good use of words. Good structure. Very creative!
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I looked and this and found it a difficult piece to attempt. You have mastered it with the restrictions given. Excellent composition and form. Good use of words. Good structure. Very creative!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I can only hope your words come true. Putin is pure evil. I won't get on my soapbox tonight.. all we can do is pray for the Ukrainian's. I like your photo and use of colored text.
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I can only hope your words come true. Putin is pure evil. I won't get on my soapbox tonight.. all we can do is pray for the Ukrainian's. I like your photo and use of colored text.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great piece. You use the guidelines, and the words are beautiful. This is a great 12-word one line contest entry. I wish you much success with the contest. It is very well done.
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This is a great piece. You use the guidelines, and the words are beautiful. This is a great 12-word one line contest entry. I wish you much success with the contest. It is very well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Penpal: great use of these few words in your challenge. We have
a few war commanders that may join hell by their actions. There's
no reason to kill and push people out of their country of Ikraine. We
need to pray. God is in charge. flylikeaneagle
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Penpal: great use of these few words in your challenge. We have
a few war commanders that may join hell by their actions. There's
no reason to kill and push people out of their country of Ikraine. We
need to pray. God is in charge. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022