He Will Win
God doesn't make mistakes59 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Linda, I think you've chosen a most excellent theme for your 2-4-2 poem. It is one of the few short poems I've read that needs no explanation and no punctuation. It is as clear as any message could possibly be, and I believe that message with all my heart. We can know who wins the battle every time, whether or not it is at first apparent. "Faith is the substance of things hoped for and the evidence of things not seen." (Hebrews 11:1) And in that same chapter, "Without faith it is impossible to please God... " (v.6) So... you have a most wonderful little poem that gives a very big message. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for this! MM
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Linda, I think you've chosen a most excellent theme for your 2-4-2 poem. It is one of the few short poems I've read that needs no explanation and no punctuation. It is as clear as any message could possibly be, and I believe that message with all my heart. We can know who wins the battle every time, whether or not it is at first apparent. "Faith is the substance of things hoped for and the evidence of things not seen." (Hebrews 11:1) And in that same chapter, "Without faith it is impossible to please God... " (v.6) So... you have a most wonderful little poem that gives a very big message. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for this! MM
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Hi Adonna, I know if we really truly...I mean straight from
the heart...believe and have faith in God...then we have to believe and trust in Him...know we are all part of His master
plan...and He is fighting for us...and God always wins...
Thank You for an amazing review...and all your lovely stars my sweet friend...and your so very welcome...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello L. Raven,
What a marvelous piece of poetry this is!
It meets all the required norms.
Impressive phraseology.
Enchanting flow depicting an INSPIRATIONAL theme worth enjoying and reciting in one short breath!
'Nothing can stop a person from achieving / winning anything in the world, with backing of the Almighty God!' - Nicely said.
Laudable Attempt!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Hello L. Raven,
What a marvelous piece of poetry this is!
It meets all the required norms.
Impressive phraseology.
Enchanting flow depicting an INSPIRATIONAL theme worth enjoying and reciting in one short breath!
'Nothing can stop a person from achieving / winning anything in the world, with backing of the Almighty God!' - Nicely said.
Laudable Attempt!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Hi RP, so good to see sweet guy...I hope you are doing well...
long time no see my special friend...been kind of down...but all is well...
I believe RP if we truly believe in God...then we have to trust Him...I know we are all in His master plan...and I believe He is fighting for us...
it just hurts me that soooo many are dying and suffering like they are...I pray for them all...and some times don't understand
the reason...all I can do...is put it in God's hands...and have faith...sigh...
Thank You sooooo much for an amazing review...and all your shinning stars...and Thank you for your Best Of Luck...it came in second...smiling big...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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Hi L. Raven, Most Welcome!
Yes, I've been off the Site for a long time due to some unavoidable circumstances. BUT all's well.
"...it came in second..." But in fact, 'You are second to none!'
Have a nice time!! With best wishes,
~ RP
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Thank You sweet guy...I needed to smile...
and Thank You for your best wishes my wonderful friend....love xxoo
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Most Welcome! Dear L. Raven.
ACTUALLY I feel myself well-refreshed whenever I read your lovely words.
God bless you!
~ RP
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Hi L. Raven,
I came to know from Sandra just now that your youngest brother passed away on the 12th of March, and the 12th was the 1st Anniversary of your mother's passing also.
So SAD! A matter of great SORROW!!
Anyways, please face this unexpected tragedy like a bold lady as you are! May God grant peace to the departed soul, and courage to you to bear this irreparable loss!
With best wishes, ~ RP
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L. Raven, Most Welcome!
You are a God loving person. So you will have the same smile soon. I'm sure.
Take care. With best wishes,
~ RP
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you are such a sweet guy RP...
I will be ok...these are just the hardest
days...excepting...
on the 27th we're having a family reunion
dedicated to Michael...we do it with family members passed...we make poster boards of pictures...and have food...and talk about years ago...there is laughter and tears...
but most of all...there is a showing of love for family and friends...
Thank you for your best wishes...and YOU take care as well...love to ya...Linda xxoo
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Hello L. Raven,
Thank you very much for sharing your views and further Plans. Cheer up!
May God keep you healthy and wealthy in all respects! Amen!!
~ RP
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you always make me feel better...Thank you...
and you take care as well...God Bless my special friend...love to ya...xxoo
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Short strong captivated to the point I wish you were in a competition great job small smaller than a big impact keep up the good work very well done Stay inspired
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Short strong captivated to the point I wish you were in a competition great job small smaller than a big impact keep up the good work very well done Stay inspired
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi Eric, Thank You so much for a wonderful review...
so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's difficult to create a 2-4-2 poem that delivers a complete thought, but you've accepted and met the challenge. With faith in God, all things are possible and we DO win. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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It's difficult to create a 2-4-2 poem that delivers a complete thought, but you've accepted and met the challenge. With faith in God, all things are possible and we DO win. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hi LJbutterfly, I'm so sorry for my late reply...
Thank You for a wonderful review...
so glad you like it...and thank you for your
best wishes...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Terry Palardy
Thank for this positive piece of poetry on such a winter's day ... so much negativity in our world's news this season of seasons ... my heart breaks for those most in need of the peace found in your words.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank for this positive piece of poetry on such a winter's day ... so much negativity in our world's news this season of seasons ... my heart breaks for those most in need of the peace found in your words.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hi Terry, I'm so sorry for my late reply...
Thank You so much for a wonderful review...
my heart breaks for so many as well...the pain
they are going through...God Bless them all...
love Linda xxoo
Comment from Anne Johnston
"stand strong
held in God's hands
we win"
Such true word, God created this world and He has a plan. We can rest assured that He is in control and that all things are working they way He planned.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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"stand strong
held in God's hands
we win"
Such true word, God created this world and He has a plan. We can rest assured that He is in control and that all things are working they way He planned.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hi Anne, I'm so sorry for such a late reply...
and your so right...we are all in God's master plan...
and He is the one in control...and He doesn't lose...
Thank my sweet friend for a wonderful review...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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You are welcome, Linda
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Linda, Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest.. good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent message about the war and trusting God. You got my vote. :)
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Linda, Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest.. good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent message about the war and trusting God. You got my vote. :)
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hi Gypsy, I am so sorry for such a late reply...
and Than You so much for a wonderful review...
and for your vote...and the good luck in the contest...
I hope you are doing well...take care...and God Bless...
love you much...Linda xxoo
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Thank you very much, Linda. Love you too :)
Comment from karenina
I like the juxtaposition between the title: "He Will Win" and your message as regards the final line "we win." There is a message therein that far exceeds the eight-syllable parameters of this prompt! The perfect image was chosen as well. Good luck!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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I like the juxtaposition between the title: "He Will Win" and your message as regards the final line "we win." There is a message therein that far exceeds the eight-syllable parameters of this prompt! The perfect image was chosen as well. Good luck!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hi Karenina, I'm so sorry I'm so late to reply...
but Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
we just have to trust that God has us all in His master plan...
and He is fighting for us...and He will win...
God Bless beautiful you...love much...Linda xxoo
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Praying for you my friend!
Comment from Laurie Holding
It's so DIFFICULT, isn't it? This form, these constraints, leave so very little room for making an actual point, for having real content. And you've done it here, taking a giant idea and reducing it to single-syllable words. I wish you all the luck in the world (get it?) in the contest. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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It's so DIFFICULT, isn't it? This form, these constraints, leave so very little room for making an actual point, for having real content. And you've done it here, taking a giant idea and reducing it to single-syllable words. I wish you all the luck in the world (get it?) in the contest. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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HI Laurie, I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply...
Thank You so much for a wonderful review...
I'm so glad that you like it...it really is hard to make
so few words tell a story...God Bless...and thank you so much
for your good luck...and your so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an excellent 2-4-2 poem. It sends out a strong message, that God is strong and can hold us all in His hands. The picture is stunning, and tells the story for your poem. Very well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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What an excellent 2-4-2 poem. It sends out a strong message, that God is strong and can hold us all in His hands. The picture is stunning, and tells the story for your poem. Very well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Hi Sandra, I'm so sorry my amazing friend it took me so long to reply...
and Thank You beautiful girl for a wonderful review...
God has us all in His master plan...we just have to trust in Him...know He is fighting for us...ad He never loses...
sending you bunches of love...from sunny Florida...🙏🙂💖🌞🙏
Linda xxoo
