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Cloak of faith.

A poem

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We all need to have faith as much as hope as the reality of life is often harsh and cruel. A deeply faithful write Roy, I have only ever seen the light shift on a mountain as moving one would take a lot of faith, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Dolly, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, Roy, with faith, one believes in what isn't seen--but does see the results. One has to keep the faith, and that entails spreading the word, praying, and truly believing. You did a great job with your faith poem. The words are meaningful and well chosen.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Jan, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Very interesting thoughts about the nature of faith, and your notes too are right - we exercise faith all the time. Well structured and composed.
Wendy

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Wendy, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
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Roy, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about faith! You used very true and very good descriptive words, great scripture and lovely art work. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Teri, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
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If one confesses faith but never displays any action that illustrates that faith, he is a liar and will gain no benefit from his empty statements. Faith is not just something you claim, it must be expressed by works that rely upon that faith. Step out on faith and you will suffer no misstep.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Ralf, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
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Hotter than Poetry In Motion! For, you were very creative about the rhyme scheme. Nevertheless, it was easy to the eyes and ears. Keep Writing. And try to stop by. Stay connected

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from June Sargent
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Faith is not the possession of all, as the Bible makes clear. However, for tbose who have it - it takes sometimes a lifetime to grow from seeds planted long ago. Once we have found our cloak of faith, hold onto it - I cannot imagine surviving in today's world witbout my faith!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks June, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is another poem, solidly grounded in the tenets of religious beliefs, that eposes clearly the importance and significance of Faith. Well written, well said. Religion that works is clearly based on the intertwining of the three great virtues, Faith, Hope and Love.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Kate, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from juliaSjames
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Dear Roy

I admire the fact that your poetry is firmly based not only in your love of the Divine but in your knowledge of the word. This makes your writes resonate with confidence. They ring out like bronze bells.

In this poem you use wonderful imagery to snow how faith must be nurtured and shared. Again and again.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Julia, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy