If Bubbles Could Be Butterflies
Picture This Club26 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are exciting, interesting, descriptive, fun and
creative. I recently saw a video of wedding where they had a bubble
machine and it filled the outdoor reception with bubbles! It was
delightful to watch. I enjoyed this joyful poem. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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The author's words are exciting, interesting, descriptive, fun and
creative. I recently saw a video of wedding where they had a bubble
machine and it filled the outdoor reception with bubbles! It was
delightful to watch. I enjoyed this joyful poem. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for such a lovely review!
Comment from royowen
What a fascinatingly work Yvonne, taking that piece of art prompt, and fitting this in to a wonderfully moulded and skilfully exercised and scribed piece of delightful poetry such as this. Written in 8886, aaab stanzas, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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What a fascinatingly work Yvonne, taking that piece of art prompt, and fitting this in to a wonderfully moulded and skilfully exercised and scribed piece of delightful poetry such as this. Written in 8886, aaab stanzas, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing, and for the lovely comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I loved the thought and imagery behind this club entry. My first graders loved bubbles and they loved butterflies, so why not put the two together. Thank you for sharing. You made my day.
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I loved the thought and imagery behind this club entry. My first graders loved bubbles and they loved butterflies, so why not put the two together. Thank you for sharing. You made my day.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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How kind of you to say. I'm happy you liked my bit of nonsense. I was just saying this just sort of popped into my head. And we all know what a weird place that is. lol.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent poem equipped with rhyme choices that set the mind free. I love the rhyme scheme and the variety of words that rhyme so well you can hardly tell they are rhymes. Bubbles to butterflies is a wonderful idea. If only bubbles could mend the hearts of the men and women who want to go to war we would be much better off than before.
The flow is smooth as melted butter. The cadence too.
Thanks for sharing this positive and inspirational poem with me.
Have a lovely week,
Jesse
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This is an excellent poem equipped with rhyme choices that set the mind free. I love the rhyme scheme and the variety of words that rhyme so well you can hardly tell they are rhymes. Bubbles to butterflies is a wonderful idea. If only bubbles could mend the hearts of the men and women who want to go to war we would be much better off than before.
The flow is smooth as melted butter. The cadence too.
Thanks for sharing this positive and inspirational poem with me.
Have a lovely week,
Jesse
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I'm so happy you found it inspirational. Thank you for an wonderful review.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Yvonne,
I enjoyed your entry for "Butterfly Dreams".
I love your rhyme scheme, with that 4th line "floating" all by itself. And that 3rd verse of near rhymes was special, too... "begin/again/been".
"If bubbles could be butterflies,
I'd blow until I filled the skies" ... really nice alliteration with "b" words.
"so happy to be flying free
to float around and tickle me" ... and here with "f" words.
This is what I call whimsical!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Hi Yvonne,
I enjoyed your entry for "Butterfly Dreams".
I love your rhyme scheme, with that 4th line "floating" all by itself. And that 3rd verse of near rhymes was special, too... "begin/again/been".
"If bubbles could be butterflies,
I'd blow until I filled the skies" ... really nice alliteration with "b" words.
"so happy to be flying free
to float around and tickle me" ... and here with "f" words.
This is what I call whimsical!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for these lovely comments. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is certainly a beautiful poem and well written too. The artwork is gorgeous and adds a lot to the writing. I truly enjoyed reading this work of yours and will watch for more of the same.
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This is certainly a beautiful poem and well written too. The artwork is gorgeous and adds a lot to the writing. I truly enjoyed reading this work of yours and will watch for more of the same.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for a lovely review.
