Paw Prints on Your Heart
Letting go, even though it hurts37 total reviews
Comment from Karen Alexandra
What a lovely poem threaded with love and sincerity. It has a great flow and is relateable tall.The poem illustrates a dedicated and resilient bond which makes it an emotional read. Well done and good luck .
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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What a lovely poem threaded with love and sincerity. It has a great flow and is relateable tall.The poem illustrates a dedicated and resilient bond which makes it an emotional read. Well done and good luck .
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me! I am just starting to finally let others read my work.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and emotional rhyming poem you have penned about paw prints on your heart. You used very good descriptive and loving words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written and emotional rhyming poem you have penned about paw prints on your heart. You used very good descriptive and loving words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me! I am just starting to finally let others read my work.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I would have to read this as my cat is dying. It set me off with tears.
A beautiful poem as a dog says his first final goodbye.
It is a heartfelt poem. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
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I would have to read this as my cat is dying. It set me off with tears.
A beautiful poem as a dog says his first final goodbye.
It is a heartfelt poem. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a Great flow and followed the rhyme scheme well.nice photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a Great flow and followed the rhyme scheme well.nice photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, well-written poem describes movingly the fast friendship between a loyal pet and its loving friend/master. I find the last line to be especially memorable.
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Your concise, well-written poem describes movingly the fast friendship between a loyal pet and its loving friend/master. I find the last line to be especially memorable.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Your line above, letting go, even though it hurts speaks to me personally. I have lost companion animals such as my kitty, Emma, who was so important to me that it was the hardest thing to do to let go of her when she had to leave this earth. I still miss her though I have tried to let her go it is difficult to do so.
Now I have the remaining kitty in my life named Sunny who has stepped up to be number one in my life. I know it will be extremely difficult to lose her and I am dreading the day that she passes away.
By the way, I love your poem with its rhymes that say how hard it is to let go of your pets.
Thanks for the gentle reminder that we only live with our pets for a short time before they move on and we need to let go of them when they go.
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Your line above, letting go, even though it hurts speaks to me personally. I have lost companion animals such as my kitty, Emma, who was so important to me that it was the hardest thing to do to let go of her when she had to leave this earth. I still miss her though I have tried to let her go it is difficult to do so.
Now I have the remaining kitty in my life named Sunny who has stepped up to be number one in my life. I know it will be extremely difficult to lose her and I am dreading the day that she passes away.
By the way, I love your poem with its rhymes that say how hard it is to let go of your pets.
Thanks for the gentle reminder that we only live with our pets for a short time before they move on and we need to let go of them when they go.
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. It's never easy letting your pet go. I wrote this to help ease some of the pain I was watching my patient's owners go thru.
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How very thoughtful of you. I agree it is never easy to let your pet go.
Jesse
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Paw Prints on Your Heart ', is is an exceptionally well-written and heart-breaking piece. My tears are still flowing as I write this. To me this is a true six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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'Paw Prints on Your Heart ', is is an exceptionally well-written and heart-breaking piece. My tears are still flowing as I write this. To me this is a true six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much! Really, it means the world to me.
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You're welcome and I'm delighted t hear it.
Comment from Wendy G
I can relate to this one, having lost a much loved Labrador nearly three years ago. I could identify with every sentence, and I saw both your tender love and your pain. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I can relate to this one, having lost a much loved Labrador nearly three years ago. I could identify with every sentence, and I saw both your tender love and your pain. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much! Really, it means the world to me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Losing a pet is always traumatic for the family as we grow accustomed to having them around and there is a great feeling of grief and loss when they die, a heartfelt and poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Losing a pet is always traumatic for the family as we grow accustomed to having them around and there is a great feeling of grief and loss when they die, a heartfelt and poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you again! I am new to sharing my writing, so I am loving the feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, Paw Prints on Your Heart, follows the required rhyme scheme and give s narration to the loyal family dog who rightly states his effect on all who would know him. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This spiritual poem, Paw Prints on Your Heart, follows the required rhyme scheme and give s narration to the loyal family dog who rightly states his effect on all who would know him. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much! Really, it means the world to me.