The Return
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You sure have to keep awake with this story. Being Margot is trying to find out what happened to Meg and the fall from Meg's horse, it will probably solve the ghosts of the past (Miles and Meg) so Margot can have her own life back.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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You sure have to keep awake with this story. Being Margot is trying to find out what happened to Meg and the fall from Meg's horse, it will probably solve the ghosts of the past (Miles and Meg) so Margot can have her own life back.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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That's the plan, Rosemary. Margot will now become the detective who solves (hopefully) the crime of the century! Or at least, the one that week! LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Ben Colder
Though doubt circles reality in this story, I know we entertain Angels unaware. I have seen them and the celestials as well. In my 45 years of a miracle ministry, I assure you life is there behind the curtain.
I know this is fiction, but something motivated you to write it. I wonder?
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Though doubt circles reality in this story, I know we entertain Angels unaware. I have seen them and the celestials as well. In my 45 years of a miracle ministry, I assure you life is there behind the curtain.
I know this is fiction, but something motivated you to write it. I wonder?
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Sorry I'm so late replying, Chuck, we had family around for Graham's birthday, and it was a bit hectic, but nice.
I loved your review, and you have me wondering. I believe there are angels walking around us. This story is unlike any I've written before, so, who knows? Thank you, dear friend. And a big hug for the sixth star. :)) Sandy xx
Comment from damommy
So Miles can see Margot as herself! What a clever twist. It will be interesting to see how he handles the situation with the two of them. There may be trouble when Miles goes home for staying there overnight. I can hardly wait to see how this plays out.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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So Miles can see Margot as herself! What a clever twist. It will be interesting to see how he handles the situation with the two of them. There may be trouble when Miles goes home for staying there overnight. I can hardly wait to see how this plays out.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I'm sorry it has taken so long to reply, it was Graham's bithday and we had quite a party for him because for the last two years his landed right in lockdown. So he was spoilt, lol.
Now, Margot must try to become a detective, she needs to save Meg, who shouldn't have died when she did. This story is taking on a will of its own now!! lol. Thank you for the lovely review, my dear SATP, and the golden star. I'm glad you are still enjoying my story. Sending you loads of love and a big hug. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
In other words, "Follow me, we need to talk." LOL Yes, Miles does need to fill Margot in on his plans. You certainly have these time travel stories down pat, Sandra. Well done. We will see what is going on here soon. Someone caused Meg's accident and they are sure to find out who. Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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In other words, "Follow me, we need to talk." LOL Yes, Miles does need to fill Margot in on his plans. You certainly have these time travel stories down pat, Sandra. Well done. We will see what is going on here soon. Someone caused Meg's accident and they are sure to find out who. Nancy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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You got the subtle hint, Nancy! Lol. Now to find the culprit and save Meg. Thanks, my dear friend! Love and hugs, and have a lovely week. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh I love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. It gets more and more interesting. I can't wait for next weeks posting. I hope Margot can figure out what happened to Meg.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Oh I love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. It gets more and more interesting. I can't wait for next weeks posting. I hope Margot can figure out what happened to Meg.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, I'm so pleased you are enjoying this story. And thank you big time for the golden sixth star! That was so kind of you. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
Really good chapter! I like where you are taking the story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you write about 1886.
It is unique and interesting that Miles still appears to be able to see Margot, and I'm curious how that will play into the story going forward!
I am also looking forward to seeing what Meg's character & personality is like to know if she is more similar to Margot than just appearances.
Thank you for sharing!!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Really good chapter! I like where you are taking the story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you write about 1886.
It is unique and interesting that Miles still appears to be able to see Margot, and I'm curious how that will play into the story going forward!
I am also looking forward to seeing what Meg's character & personality is like to know if she is more similar to Margot than just appearances.
Thank you for sharing!!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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One of my previous books in my time-travel-trilogy took us back to 1864, I do like that era, at least to write about. Thanks so much for another lovely review, Ethan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this part. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from John Ciarmello
Wow!
"'Bessie's eyes twinkled with merriment as she replied, 'I's didn't need to, my dear, 'I's not from your time, or this time, 'I's belong to all time.'"
Sandra Mitchell! You cheated my muse with these incredibly written, preposterously vague, yet brilliant words of hidden of wonderment. Way to hide what I wanted to know! Brilliant as well as sneaky. I'll be waiting! Lol
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Wow!
"'Bessie's eyes twinkled with merriment as she replied, 'I's didn't need to, my dear, 'I's not from your time, or this time, 'I's belong to all time.'"
Sandra Mitchell! You cheated my muse with these incredibly written, preposterously vague, yet brilliant words of hidden of wonderment. Way to hide what I wanted to know! Brilliant as well as sneaky. I'll be waiting! Lol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, John, your reviews always leave me with a grin on my face. Now we have some detective work to do. This will be fun. Thanks again for your encouraging review, my friend, I always a appreciate them. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent chapter full of action and tension. I am eager to find out if Meg was killed or had an accident. I already have a suspect in mind. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Excellent chapter full of action and tension. I am eager to find out if Meg was killed or had an accident. I already have a suspect in mind. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you, dear Shirley, for another really nice review and for the sixth golden star. I'm sorry it's taken so long to reply, it was my hubby's birthday yesterday and it was a really busy day, as you can imagine with five sons and their families!! I'm looking forward to reading your next post! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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No problem my friend. I hope your husband had a wonderful birthday. Shirley
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A nice surprise seeing your chapter so early, Sandra.
-You did a great job with this one.
-It flowed effortlessly with heartfelt sentiments and a little apprehension on Margot's part, and I can't say I blame her!
-Bessie remained calm throughout, and helped Margot understand what needed to be done.
-I liked how you describe her as she touched the headstone; it was kind of like Alice going down the rabbit hole, but not as dramatic.
-Now we know that Bessie is "from all time" so who knows when and where she will show up!
-You have a smooth transition to the past as Lady Crawly has just been buried.
-A good scene between Miles and Meg. It is reminiscent of those Victorian love stories when one parent or the other disapproves of the marriage. Miles even references that idea: "'Society and their arrogance."
-I think there is a little foreshadowing at the end with Miles and horse.
-It will be very interesting to see what Margot learns as she listens in to conversations, as Bessie has mentioned to her.
-A really good chapter.
crossed Miles' face, made Meg feel guilty [no comma]
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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-A nice surprise seeing your chapter so early, Sandra.
-You did a great job with this one.
-It flowed effortlessly with heartfelt sentiments and a little apprehension on Margot's part, and I can't say I blame her!
-Bessie remained calm throughout, and helped Margot understand what needed to be done.
-I liked how you describe her as she touched the headstone; it was kind of like Alice going down the rabbit hole, but not as dramatic.
-Now we know that Bessie is "from all time" so who knows when and where she will show up!
-You have a smooth transition to the past as Lady Crawly has just been buried.
-A good scene between Miles and Meg. It is reminiscent of those Victorian love stories when one parent or the other disapproves of the marriage. Miles even references that idea: "'Society and their arrogance."
-I think there is a little foreshadowing at the end with Miles and horse.
-It will be very interesting to see what Margot learns as she listens in to conversations, as Bessie has mentioned to her.
-A really good chapter.
crossed Miles' face, made Meg feel guilty [no comma]
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Just popping in for a minute. Thank you so very much, Pam, your review is wonderful, and thanks for that nit, I quickly corrected it. And a big hug for the golden star!! I'll have to chat more later. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. Hugs back to you!
Comment from BethShelby
This is an interesting turn. Miles seems to know what he needs Margot to do. At this point, Miles didn't know she was going to die from a fall off of a horse. It is almost like he knows what happened and yet can do nothing to stop it himself. Bessie being from not the past not the present but all times is an mysterious concept. Like Bessie said, I don't need to make to much of this. lol
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is an interesting turn. Miles seems to know what he needs Margot to do. At this point, Miles didn't know she was going to die from a fall off of a horse. It is almost like he knows what happened and yet can do nothing to stop it himself. Bessie being from not the past not the present but all times is an mysterious concept. Like Bessie said, I don't need to make to much of this. lol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Beth, for this lovely review. Yes, Miles can't do anything because he can't investigate something that hasn't happened, while Margot can. You'll see later why she can and Miles can't. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Do you know anything about Ralf? She has completely gone from the site, I know she was seriously ill. I'm hoping my worst fears aren't true. xx
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No, I'm worried about Ralf too. The last I know was in December and she said she been diagnosed with Leukemia. She was worried about her self and said she keep in touch, but she didn't and I don't know how to get in touch with her.
Beth
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It's very worrying. I'll ask around, if I learn anything, I'll let you know. xx
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I noticed her name isn't listed anymore but her portfolio is still there and I sent a message which she won't get unless she looks on this site.
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I just got an email from Elizabeth Emerald that said she died. She said she got the word from Judy Lawless who googled Obits. I don't when she died but must have been recently.
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We are losing so many now, it shows how how old so many of us are. Frightening, really. Thanks, Beth. Not good news, but at least we know. xxx