Rivers of time
A poem.51 total reviews
Comment from 1Dreamer
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. The words flow and are faith filled. Especially like "We'll never know the road ahead, yet trust is best, be spirit-led. Such an important message to apply in these times.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. The words flow and are faith filled. Especially like "We'll never know the road ahead, yet trust is best, be spirit-led. Such an important message to apply in these times.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
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Back at you!
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Thank you so much
Comment from Kayte Ray
this is such a complete and beautiful piece.
You present your images well
the story comes together easily and it is an enjoyable read that flows easily
I like your rhythm
this is an outstanding piece
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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this is such a complete and beautiful piece.
You present your images well
the story comes together easily and it is an enjoyable read that flows easily
I like your rhythm
this is an outstanding piece
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Kayte, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from JPGeo
This stuff flows out of you like honey. These are beautiful, natural couplets. We are close enough in age that I know that even the most faith-based life is wrought with a certain restlessness regarding time. Honey, man.
John
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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This stuff flows out of you like honey. These are beautiful, natural couplets. We are close enough in age that I know that even the most faith-based life is wrought with a certain restlessness regarding time. Honey, man.
John
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
Your poem always has spirit and is deeply meaningful. Besides being written very well, your deep faith shines through, helping others who may have doubts. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Your poem always has spirit and is deeply meaningful. Besides being written very well, your deep faith shines through, helping others who may have doubts. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
More than a wisp of wisdom in this one Roy. I myself, don't want to know what is around the bend. As the years speed past we need to embrace each day we can.
Lovely poem Roy, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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More than a wisp of wisdom in this one Roy. I myself, don't want to know what is around the bend. As the years speed past we need to embrace each day we can.
Lovely poem Roy, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Valda for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
Reverent verse, you lay out faith in breadcrumbs, all are called to gather for the feast! Heaven's time is what makes life eternal!
"My God's a stream, A wind-blown sigh. "
Glory!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Reverent verse, you lay out faith in breadcrumbs, all are called to gather for the feast! Heaven's time is what makes life eternal!
"My God's a stream, A wind-blown sigh. "
Glory!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks Karen,,for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
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You're welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for the wonderful meditation, Roy! And praise God that He is eternal and holds all our time. I especially liked:
"My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes."
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the wonderful meditation, Roy! And praise God that He is eternal and holds all our time. I especially liked:
"My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes."
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks Helen,for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from lancellot
Yes, trusting in God is always a good thing. Not the only thing. It is also true that we do not know what the future brings, but we can prepare for probabilities and set ourselves up for plans.
This is well written and very thought provoking work.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Yes, trusting in God is always a good thing. Not the only thing. It is also true that we do not know what the future brings, but we can prepare for probabilities and set ourselves up for plans.
This is well written and very thought provoking work.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks, for these great comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from bhogg
Great post. Think of all the writings on time. I suppose we all would like to think we control our own time. Nice thought about it all being spirit led.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Great post. Think of all the writings on time. I suppose we all would like to think we control our own time. Nice thought about it all being spirit led.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Dear Roy,
This is such a fantastic poem. I like the rhythm and the images you write about using time and cloudless skies. I was "down" for a few months and I kept remembering your poems that opined about trusting God. Those words helped.
Excellent work, Roy.
Good luck in all you do.
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Dear Roy,
This is such a fantastic poem. I like the rhythm and the images you write about using time and cloudless skies. I was "down" for a few months and I kept remembering your poems that opined about trusting God. Those words helped.
Excellent work, Roy.
Good luck in all you do.
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks Cindy, for these outstanding comments a great review and affirmation blessings Roy
