Love at First Sight
A love that made a way.22 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your four-line rhyming love poem is a great response to the prompt. It
joyously celebrates enduring love, the appreciation for one each other that is essential for success.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
Your four-line rhyming love poem is a great response to the prompt. It
joyously celebrates enduring love, the appreciation for one each other that is essential for success.
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing.
I barely made the deadline.
I really wanted to submit this poem, because we are about to hit 25 years.
Sometimes it is a good reminder of once, when we would have been happy to be in the same room- we now have a marriage to last us the rest of our lives.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Nice tribute to a lasting relationship and a good entry for this contest - a four-liner on the topic of love is a bit tough!
Nice pic too - you both look very happy.
Good luck.
Steve
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
Nice tribute to a lasting relationship and a good entry for this contest - a four-liner on the topic of love is a bit tough!
Nice pic too - you both look very happy.
Good luck.
Steve
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading. I barely made the deadline on this one.
I just had to say something since our 25 year anniversary is in May.
Something to celebrate
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My wife and I will hit 48 years married in July so we've got you beat! :O)