Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Club entry for the "~ Cascade ~ week of 1-19-2022 " event in "Potlatch Poetry"! Best of wishes in the contest my friend;-) The words flowed nicely throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
Perfect entry for the Club entry for the "~ Cascade ~ week of 1-19-2022 " event in "Potlatch Poetry"! Best of wishes in the contest my friend;-) The words flowed nicely throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Melodie, as always thank you fo much for your review and comments.
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;-)
Comment from royowen
This is a different cascade poem Jim, a little different from the normal ones that I've seen, which are normally in triplets but that's ok, it seems it can be any length and presumably and meter, but this I superbly written dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
This is a different cascade poem Jim, a little different from the normal ones that I've seen, which are normally in triplets but that's ok, it seems it can be any length and presumably and meter, but this I superbly written dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Roy, as always the case I appreciate your review comments and friendship.
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Most welcome
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a well-constructed Cascade, but more importantly, a strong and endearing expression of your faith. Your imagery of the path that is laid out before us all is very well captured. Thanks for sharing.
PK
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
This is a well-constructed Cascade, but more importantly, a strong and endearing expression of your faith. Your imagery of the path that is laid out before us all is very well captured. Thanks for sharing.
PK
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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PK, thanks a bunch!