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Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Shelley Kaye!
What an exceptionally well-crafted nonet. How I wish I had six stars to affix upon your offering!
Love the direct verbiage, and the non-capitalization if "i" which emphasizes to this reader your feelings of being "shy, quiet, soft-spoken,
total introvert ~"
Your form is "spot on" = not easy to accomplish.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Good morning, Shelley Kaye!
What an exceptionally well-crafted nonet. How I wish I had six stars to affix upon your offering!
Love the direct verbiage, and the non-capitalization if "i" which emphasizes to this reader your feelings of being "shy, quiet, soft-spoken,
total introvert ~"
Your form is "spot on" = not easy to accomplish.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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thank you kt :-)
Comment from karenina
Wonderfully rendered nonet that speaks to a silence emancipated when we spill our words upon the page! You speak for many of us who find our voice in our writing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Wonderfully rendered nonet that speaks to a silence emancipated when we spill our words upon the page! You speak for many of us who find our voice in our writing!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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thank you karen :)
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:)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' i share myself ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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' i share myself ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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thank you duchess :-)
Comment from LJbutterfly
The beauty of this poem is that it captures the inner spirit of many writers who express feelings and emotions better on non-judgmental paper. Your poem demonstrates thought, feelings, and creativity. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The beauty of this poem is that it captures the inner spirit of many writers who express feelings and emotions better on non-judgmental paper. Your poem demonstrates thought, feelings, and creativity. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you butterfly :-)
Comment from Carol Clark2
I like your expression of the ability to write what you cannot speak, in this nonet. I think a number of writers would agree with you, that it is easier to share thoughts on paper/computer. Sometimes it's good to be able to work through a message before it pops out unedited. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I like your expression of the ability to write what you cannot speak, in this nonet. I think a number of writers would agree with you, that it is easier to share thoughts on paper/computer. Sometimes it's good to be able to work through a message before it pops out unedited. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you carol :)
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You're welcome. Have a blessed rest of the week.
Comment from WriterHeather
I can certainly relate to how you feel, especially thecpart about being shy. I only write once in a while but it's always about my emotions. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I can certainly relate to how you feel, especially thecpart about being shy. I only write once in a while but it's always about my emotions. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you heather :-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
nonet site contest
i share myself
shelley kaye
A great nonet for the contest you did very well of saying,
There are many people that don't want to speak,
Like me I rather express my self by using a pencil or ball point.
I wish you the very best in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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nonet site contest
i share myself
shelley kaye
A great nonet for the contest you did very well of saying,
There are many people that don't want to speak,
Like me I rather express my self by using a pencil or ball point.
I wish you the very best in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you gert :-)
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Shelly you are welcome
I believe I know you my name is Gert . I read many of your writing here on Fanstory
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this poem defines so many of us in the Fanstory community and can be viewed as a dedication to writers all - beautifully descriptive and in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this pearl of a poem...
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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In my opinion, this poem defines so many of us in the Fanstory community and can be viewed as a dedication to writers all - beautifully descriptive and in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this pearl of a poem...
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you eve :)
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You are so welcome, Shelley, my pleasure indeed. Thank you for sharing this insightful work...Eve
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Shelley Kaye a happy Thursday to you. I really enjoyed your poem on multiple levels. Aside from the fact that it was well-written, I can totally relate to it I too am an introvert who shares himself through his pen. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Hello Shelley Kaye a happy Thursday to you. I really enjoyed your poem on multiple levels. Aside from the fact that it was well-written, I can totally relate to it I too am an introvert who shares himself through his pen. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you '13' :)
Comment from Sanku
I can share that sentiment with you. I like to pretend to be something which I am not. i liked your nonet very much .It is well written and suit your theme.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I can share that sentiment with you. I like to pretend to be something which I am not. i liked your nonet very much .It is well written and suit your theme.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you sanku :)