My Private Park
A Roger's Refrain poem29 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Beautifully written. You put me in the setting and that is a talent! I love the way you write. Flowing, gentle, easy to read and understand. Quite a talent you have! I appreciate the author notes also. Sentimental! Lovely!
Wendy
A. Willow Bends
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Beautifully written. You put me in the setting and that is a talent! I love the way you write. Flowing, gentle, easy to read and understand. Quite a talent you have! I appreciate the author notes also. Sentimental! Lovely!
Wendy
A. Willow Bends
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate the wonderful compliments.
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture, damommy. It is indeed one of your private treasures. I loved your words of the Roger's Refrain because they showed the beauty of all the forest brought you. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Thank you so much.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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What a beautiful picture, damommy. It is indeed one of your private treasures. I loved your words of the Roger's Refrain because they showed the beauty of all the forest brought you. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Thank you so much.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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You are certainly most welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a neat poem. I like the Roger's Refrain. I'm going to have to try it. The the little bit of repetition adds to the beauty of the poem rather than sounding too repetitive and annoying. It's a lovely picture and does look like woodland path worth walking on.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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This is a neat poem. I like the Roger's Refrain. I'm going to have to try it. The the little bit of repetition adds to the beauty of the poem rather than sounding too repetitive and annoying. It's a lovely picture and does look like woodland path worth walking on.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a neat poem. I like the Roger's Refrain. I'm going to have to try it. The the little bit of repetition adds to the beauty of the poem rather than sounding too repetitive and annoying. It's a lovely picture and does look like woodland path worth walking on.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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This is a neat poem. I like the Roger's Refrain. I'm going to have to try it. The the little bit of repetition adds to the beauty of the poem rather than sounding too repetitive and annoying. It's a lovely picture and does look like woodland path worth walking on.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Yes, try one soon.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is such a lovely tribute to the Grandparents you loved so very much. I appreciate how you allowed the story to write itself. I walk, I listen, I like, I claim, are all a natural progression of the path you lead us on. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the Love from Above.
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This is such a lovely tribute to the Grandparents you loved so very much. I appreciate how you allowed the story to write itself. I walk, I listen, I like, I claim, are all a natural progression of the path you lead us on. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm glad you noticed the picture. It's very special to me.
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My Privilege to Read and Pleasure to Review.
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful poem, the flow is superb, the rhyming perfect, the theme idyllic. One has to have the gift of an inner metronome to write as well as this, I'm a musician, it was before I was a songwriter, and now a pretend poet. But I do know rhythm, and you've got it Yvonne, well done, blessings riy
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What a beautiful poem, the flow is superb, the rhyming perfect, the theme idyllic. One has to have the gift of an inner metronome to write as well as this, I'm a musician, it was before I was a songwriter, and now a pretend poet. But I do know rhythm, and you've got it Yvonne, well done, blessings riy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Roy. I play the organ and piano. I've played for funeral wedding, you name it.
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I was right, there you go, I have a head metronome, of course learning to play with a metronome has consequences, dee dee dee
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I never used a metronome. My teacher thought it would be detrimental to depend on one.
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I suppose they all have opinions, timing is not necessarily natural, we had a drummer, (he had to go) who got faster and faster. But I never struck a music teacher who didn?t use a metronome for students, a curious one.
Comment from LovnPeace
What a pleasure to walk this lovely path. I so love the forest and especially
mountains. It delivers peace just reading it. What a pretty lady you are and fine poet. Blessings, Barbara
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What a pleasure to walk this lovely path. I so love the forest and especially
mountains. It delivers peace just reading it. What a pretty lady you are and fine poet. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you for such lovely comments.
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You're most welcome and well deserved. Barbara
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine walk in the park here and I was on this journey with you, another guest at the park, much enjoyed. Just one suggestion for this line:
"Some little squirrels were hard at play"
suggestion:
"Some little squirrels, hard at play"
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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A fine walk in the park here and I was on this journey with you, another guest at the park, much enjoyed. Just one suggestion for this line:
"Some little squirrels were hard at play"
suggestion:
"Some little squirrels, hard at play"
Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I think the bump here is because here in Arkansas, we say squirls, one syllable. lol. Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem causes me to want to be a forest guest. I wan to see, feel, and hear all that the forest has to offer.
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Your poem hit the spot today.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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This poem causes me to want to be a forest guest. I wan to see, feel, and hear all that the forest has to offer.
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Your poem hit the spot today.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I love nothing better than to be outdoors, except in summer. lol.