Comment from Yardier

Exceptional

Beautifully written by one who's eyes are open. It is so refreshing to 'see'
the light of life in another's eyes. I hope you continue to post more. Yard.
2 Kings 6:17-20
New International Version
17 And Elisha prayed, "Open his eyes, Lord, so that he may see." Then the Lord opened the servant's eyes, and he looked and saw the hills full of horses and chariots of fire all around Elisha.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Wow, thanks so much for your insightful review... I loved it and much gratitude for the sparkly six-plus stars.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

Beautiful poem about angels. Lovely overall presentation background and font. Love this part. Vivid visions of vapor...bravely give me a glimpse;Angelic haze takes form...revealing Angels in the mist. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

hey Joanne... thanks for your starry review and your lovely thoughts... yours xo

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are mystifying, interesting, descriptive and creative.
Angels in the mist is a lovely thought. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is tranquil and compliments the theme and words
of this poem.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

hey Harmony... thanks for your really stellar review... yours, xo

Comment from Gee

Excellent

Oh I think this is a good contest entry for the angel contest.

I think the image and color scheme goes well with the poem.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

thanks so much for reading and xo

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Exceptional

Such a well written poem. What is it about angels that make life seem like a blessing? When they are our guardian angel the skies light up with sunshine. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Rosemary thanks so much for the stellar-plus review... I am honored and humbled... again thanks xo

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Nicely written poem about through the quiet of the night the mist of angels shines in the moon. The words flow easily and you make a point with your words. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

thanks so much Patty... I really am grateful for the stellar review... xo

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

This feels like a 'hymn' when read aloud. I love it and enjoyed the feeling of safety that it encouraged. Imagery and cadence are done well, as is the picture shown with it. good luck in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

that is a lovely thought... a hymn... thanks for that and your stellar review. xo

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Nicely done in free verse. This is the way I envision encounters with angels. I have never had one, but I am hoping one day to have that experience.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

thanks Paul... and your stellar review is appreciated... xo

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Good

Perfect entry for the About Angels writing prompt Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend!
This second stanza doesn't rhyme as the other stanzas do! ("As I walk in darkness,
bushes rustle as I pass.
A peculiar feeling overcomes;
and still I feel safe.") The other stanzas rhyme perfectly, it's a shame;-( Otherwise an excellent poem!

Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you this New Year!

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

thanks so much

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

What a lovely way to express the presence of our guardians. There is so much beyond the small world we acknowledge as reality that it really does blow one's mind. You have conveyed a wonderful sense of peace, contentment and security. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

thanks so much Susan... I really am in gratitude for my stellar review... xo

reply by Susan Newell on 08-Jan-2022

You are welcome.