Now I Grieve Alone
Also for my husband28 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Rdfrdmom2, seventeen syllables of heartache. Good 5-7-5 format.
Your message is clear. Well-chosen artwork. My deepest condolences to you and your family. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer ~ Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Hello Rdfrdmom2, seventeen syllables of heartache. Good 5-7-5 format.
Your message is clear. Well-chosen artwork. My deepest condolences to you and your family. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer ~ Margaret
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Margaret. Jan
Comment from Gert sherwood
Also for my husband
Now I Grieve Alone
Rdfrdmom2, Your 5-7-5 Poetry for the Contest speaks miles of words of how you grieve alone.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Also for my husband
Now I Grieve Alone
Rdfrdmom2, Your 5-7-5 Poetry for the Contest speaks miles of words of how you grieve alone.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Gert, did your husband recently pass? If so, I am so sorry. Jan
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Hello Jan
Oh no Stan,
is still here with me to love
Gert
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form, Jan. Your syllable count is correct per line. Your words are well thought out, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Your contest entry is in great form, Jan. Your syllable count is correct per line. Your words are well thought out, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, jan. A good friend of mine suggested strongly that I really should start writing again. This seemed like a good place to start. jan
Comment from Brian S. Watson
Excellent poem about dealing with grief and sadness after losing someone you really care about! I'm sorry for your loss. I hope over time you're able to recover from something so tragic.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Excellent poem about dealing with grief and sadness after losing someone you really care about! I'm sorry for your loss. I hope over time you're able to recover from something so tragic.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Brian, thank you so much for your exceptional rating as well as for your condolences. Rdfrdmoom2
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have my deepest condolences for your loss. It is hard to suddenly find yourself alone when you have always been two. And it does catch you off guard. This is lovely but sad. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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You have my deepest condolences for your loss. It is hard to suddenly find yourself alone when you have always been two. And it does catch you off guard. This is lovely but sad. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, prettybluebirds. Rdfrdmom2
Comment from mermaids
Your short poem says much in few words. You have written an excellent grief poem that touches the heart and I am sure many can relate. "When you touched eternity" is a perfect line.
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Your short poem says much in few words. You have written an excellent grief poem that touches the heart and I am sure many can relate. "When you touched eternity" is a perfect line.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Again, mermaids, thank you so much for this exceptional rating. I am most humbled. This is the first thing I've written in weeks. Jan
Comment from Ben Colder
I understand the feeling. My wife and son went to heaven months apart. I got a double whammy. It takes a while but the pain eases somewhat. My blessings to you. Keep writing, it keeps the mind occupied.
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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I understand the feeling. My wife and son went to heaven months apart. I got a double whammy. It takes a while but the pain eases somewhat. My blessings to you. Keep writing, it keeps the mind occupied.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Ben: I am so sorry for your double losses. Thank you for your blessings. Godspeed to you, too. Rdfrdmom2
Comment from Sherry Asbury
There are those of us who grieve with you...not in the same way, but in his honor and for your comfort. The picture is so lovely and is one of my favorite sayings. May you have ease for your pain and live in pride for what you sacrificed.
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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There are those of us who grieve with you...not in the same way, but in his honor and for your comfort. The picture is so lovely and is one of my favorite sayings. May you have ease for your pain and live in pride for what you sacrificed.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, Sherry. I had the honor of being with him when he passed. Rdfrdmom2