O Come
A Christmas song34 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this, Roy. It sounds like it will be a wonderful song for the children, containing the story of Christmas. I notice in Verse 6, that "treasures" is missing an "e", and I think you meant myrrh, instead of "mer".
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for sharing this, Roy. It sounds like it will be a wonderful song for the children, containing the story of Christmas. I notice in Verse 6, that "treasures" is missing an "e", and I think you meant myrrh, instead of "mer".
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Anne, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What a perfect writing of the Birth of Christ. With or without music it is a wonder to read and think of the Birth.
A couple of missteps: Frankincense and myrrh are the correct spelling.
Thank you for this read.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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What a perfect writing of the Birth of Christ. With or without music it is a wonder to read and think of the Birth.
A couple of missteps: Frankincense and myrrh are the correct spelling.
Thank you for this read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Mary for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem/song with us. I enjoyed reading and I am positive the children will equally enjoy reading. I am sure Jesus loves children's smiles.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for sharing this poem/song with us. I enjoyed reading and I am positive the children will equally enjoy reading. I am sure Jesus loves children's smiles.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Barbara, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading your new song, Roy. It has a lovely story embedded in it that tells about our Lord in simple, understandable language. Wish I could hear the tune that you have matched to it. Great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I enjoyed reading your new song, Roy. It has a lovely story embedded in it that tells about our Lord in simple, understandable language. Wish I could hear the tune that you have matched to it. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Melissa, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem, when set to music, will convey a wonderful, profoundly joyous and spiritual message to the children at your church. You have some misspellings in stanza 6.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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This poem, when set to music, will convey a wonderful, profoundly joyous and spiritual message to the children at your church. You have some misspellings in stanza 6.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks Jan, for this great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem cleared communicated in song, the real reason for the season of Christmas. Great lyrical flow with suitable rhymes. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and using your works to promote the message of Christ which is love and salvation. Well done, dear Roy.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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The poem cleared communicated in song, the real reason for the season of Christmas. Great lyrical flow with suitable rhymes. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and using your works to promote the message of Christ which is love and salvation. Well done, dear Roy.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks for this great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done, Roy. You did a wonderful job on this poem. It tells the story of Christ's birth in just a few stanzas.
That is indeed the true meaning of Christmas and not really about Santa Claus. God sent his son to set us free from sin.. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Well done, Roy. You did a wonderful job on this poem. It tells the story of Christ's birth in just a few stanzas.
That is indeed the true meaning of Christmas and not really about Santa Claus. God sent his son to set us free from sin.. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks Nancy, for this great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry speaks a song about three magi found the stable at Bethlehem in a manger God sent and given us His only Child our Lord Jesus to act as Saviour of mankind, they offered the gifts seeing Him; well said, well done (******), thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books pub in black & white, R 124020D21. ALCREATOR LD
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This General Poetry speaks a song about three magi found the stable at Bethlehem in a manger God sent and given us His only Child our Lord Jesus to act as Saviour of mankind, they offered the gifts seeing Him; well said, well done (******), thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books pub in black & white, R 124020D21. ALCREATOR LD
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks for this splendid review and wonderful comments, blessings Roy
Comment from John Cranford
What a beatiful song! You not only cover Jesus' glorious birth, but you incorporate salvation and His promise that one day we will live with Him. And that's precisely why He was born. He began the fulfillment of God's plan since the beginning of time - to be the sacrificial Lamb to open wide the door to heaven. He atoned for us and all we have to do is accept His redemptive love. What a wonderful God we serve, and what a wonderful servant you are! You are truly a blessing to us all. Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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What a beatiful song! You not only cover Jesus' glorious birth, but you incorporate salvation and His promise that one day we will live with Him. And that's precisely why He was born. He began the fulfillment of God's plan since the beginning of time - to be the sacrificial Lamb to open wide the door to heaven. He atoned for us and all we have to do is accept His redemptive love. What a wonderful God we serve, and what a wonderful servant you are! You are truly a blessing to us all. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks John. for this great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Tina Crute
It's a lovely song you wrote! It reads like it was inspired because it is the full and complete story in just a few verses. You touched on every facet, so seamlessly and with rhyme. Well done!
A couple tiny things...
Frankincense, myrrh, treasures. .few misspellings in verse 6. They don't impede the beautiful story poem though!
A suggestion...to save us all (to) live with Him.
Blessings today and always,
Tina
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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It's a lovely song you wrote! It reads like it was inspired because it is the full and complete story in just a few verses. You touched on every facet, so seamlessly and with rhyme. Well done!
A couple tiny things...
Frankincense, myrrh, treasures. .few misspellings in verse 6. They don't impede the beautiful story poem though!
A suggestion...to save us all (to) live with Him.
Blessings today and always,
Tina
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks Tina, for this great review and comments,nandvcorrections, blessings Roy
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You're surely welcome!
Tina