Haiku (I Woke to a World)
Haiku53 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful haiku, I love the imagery. A liquid sky is a great way to describe it, it leaves a lot to the imagination while also offering a powerful image of the scene. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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This is a beautiful haiku, I love the imagery. A liquid sky is a great way to describe it, it leaves a lot to the imagination while also offering a powerful image of the scene. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Hello Oliver. Thank you so very much!
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is lovely imagery, painting a nice picture with your words. The artwork fits your words so well. I like the sea of mist and liquid sky. Best wishes in the Haiku contest. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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This is lovely imagery, painting a nice picture with your words. The artwork fits your words so well. I like the sea of mist and liquid sky. Best wishes in the Haiku contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Hello Carol. Thanks so much. So appreciate your thoughts on this verse!
Melissa
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I'm a bit behind in reviewing, but I hope this does well in the contest. Carol
Comment from Malerie
Ah, these few words speak volume and the artwork really gives life to your poem. Well written and gives the reader a since of calm. All I need now is a cup of coffee.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Ah, these few words speak volume and the artwork really gives life to your poem. Well written and gives the reader a since of calm. All I need now is a cup of coffee.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Hello Malerie... hope you had your cup of coffee... I need one too :). Thank you for your lovely words.
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
A very beautifully written haiku. I love it ð???I awoke to a world adrift in a sea of mist. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the co test.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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A very beautifully written haiku. I love it ð???I awoke to a world adrift in a sea of mist. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the co test.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Hello Joanne. Thank you so very much. I am delighted you liked this Haiku!!
Melissa
Comment from mermaids
Your words create a painting that is alive. "Adrift in a sea of mist' and neath a liquid sky" are two lines that make nature come alive. The reader can feel a new day beginning. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of lines.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Your words create a painting that is alive. "Adrift in a sea of mist' and neath a liquid sky" are two lines that make nature come alive. The reader can feel a new day beginning. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of lines.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Mermaids. Thank you so much for your lovely comments and encouraging review!!
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
"I woke to a world
adrift in a sea of mist ~
'neath a liquid sky
You have chosen a good picture to illustrate you very descriptive words. I hope this does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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"I woke to a world
adrift in a sea of mist ~
'neath a liquid sky
You have chosen a good picture to illustrate you very descriptive words. I hope this does well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Anne!
Melissa
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You are very welcome
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sugarray77,
Nice piece of poetry in the form of 'Haiku' meeting the required norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hello Sugarray77,
Nice piece of poetry in the form of 'Haiku' meeting the required norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hi there RP. Thank you so very much for your encouraging review and thoughts on the Haiku. :)
Melissa
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Melissa, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from VJWild
Wow (I literally said that when I read this) this piece is beautiful all around. I love when the words and the artwork/photography just blend so perfectly together. Did you have the picture first and write the haiku to match? Not that it matters, but that's one of my favorite thing to do...write a poem about a picture. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Wow (I literally said that when I read this) this piece is beautiful all around. I love when the words and the artwork/photography just blend so perfectly together. Did you have the picture first and write the haiku to match? Not that it matters, but that's one of my favorite thing to do...write a poem about a picture. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hi there VJ... thank you so much for your lovely words of encouragement in your review :). Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
It is amazing that someone so talented in creating metrical pieces can also write such beautiful haiku. I really like this one. It has a mystical feel to it - should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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It is amazing that someone so talented in creating metrical pieces can also write such beautiful haiku. I really like this one. It has a mystical feel to it - should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hi dearJune! Thank you for your sweet words of encouragement!!!
Melissa
Comment from palmart
Wonderful Haiku! The Expression "Liquid sky" is really stroking!! You really impacted with that. Nice combination with the artwork, colorful and expressive. Thanks for sharing! Well-deserved recognition!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Wonderful Haiku! The Expression "Liquid sky" is really stroking!! You really impacted with that. Nice combination with the artwork, colorful and expressive. Thanks for sharing! Well-deserved recognition!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hi there!! Thank you for your lovely words and thoughts about my haiku. I really appreciate it.
Melissa
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You are nicely welcome, Sugarray77!!
Have a wonderful weekend!!