Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Well, we have a new problem. I feel sorry for Gangus. he thought he was going to have an easy life after everything he went through and now this. You did a good job writing this.

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021

Thank you, Barbara.

Comment from Summer Lange

Excellent

I liked it. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing. What a talent to be able to write chapters. I myself haven't gotten that far. Lol. I seem to only come up with poems

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021

Thank you very much, Summer.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Exceptional

This Fantasy Fiction, Chapter 14, speaks about Raziel, the God of Gods, modestly about the chronicles of Bethica; well said, well done (******); thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, wrote 114 books, ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021

Thank you so much, my dear. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Blessing to you.